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[2/19/2014 9:24:53 PM] Merlos The Mad: Turtle, word on the street is your being you [2/19/2014 9:24:56 PM] Merlos The Mad: stop that

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hello
my name is derpy hooves and i have the best mummy in the world
she made me a boat and a blanky with bubbles on it
i love bubbles
not as much as mummy though
mummy said she take me to the river today and we go boating
mummy never take me anywhere before
i so excited

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

I wonder how this will turn out.

...wow...

Well, at least you have an excuse for the bad grammar!

...

Yea, that's way out of place. Very nice story, something that potentially could be grown into something bigger, like an adult Derpy looking for her parents, but otherwise cool! Not something you'd find often.

One day iamthemithras see story about Derpy Hooves. iamthemithras happy because iamthemithras favorite stories is about Derpy! iamthemithras read story and iamthemithras happy because Derpy talk good and iamthemithras understand her very well!

iamthemithras hopes Derpy finds her father soon! and her mother come to Derpy soon also and see her new friends!

iamthemithras now wants to be a pirate now, arrr! iamthemithras knows he not as good as Derpy being pirate but that okay

iamthemithras can't wait for next chapter!

I like it, but one question, why so short? :applejackunsure:

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Because the whole idea I had for it was just her being abandoned. I never thought of anything passed her being found. Sorry :c

This made me sad. :fluttershysad: COME TO ME DERPY LET ME LOVE YOU.

3531753 Btw would you like to join my group called Equestria Empire? I'm looking for new members. :twilightsmile:

Short, but fun. Nice story!

Wow... i Love the level of innocence she shows all through out the story. I don't know why but it fits in with what i know of derpy perfectly. :pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

WHYY??? :fluttercry::fluttershysad::fluttercry::fluttercry::applecry::fluttercry: I am almost crying

:fluttercry: I like this story.

This made me sad. I love it! :D

you say this is complete. did derpy drown? who are her new friends. is she in the great beyond? you left so much in question.

perhaps she is in an orphanage.

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