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TwizzleDragon


[2/19/2014 9:24:53 PM] Merlos The Mad: Turtle, word on the street is your being you [2/19/2014 9:24:56 PM] Merlos The Mad: stop that

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Sweetie Belle? Count me in.
Sad? Oh boy...

Three words to describe this story
1) short
2) simple
3) sweet

Or: its altogether wonderful.

That was not ok to do that to my feels.
You are a monster.

I love you.

Lol terrible.

The style was good, grammar was good, ending was good, but the feels weren't there. Everyone below must be broken. Nevertheless, it's a pretty good story. I liked it. Didn't favorite it. It could've been a lot longer, too, but that's just my opinion.

I'm a tough reader, get over it.

:fluttershysad:

Short and bittersweet.

HA, I DIDN'T CRY!

2284091
Not everyone will.
Ain't something you need to be proud of, not something people should worry about either.
As long as there is something that does make you cry.

not bad. I'll assume the random letter is from the run away, or that perhaps her sister had mailed them some of her old pictures of the three so they may remember them? ending was pretty open ended.

in short, it wasn't bad. it managed to get my attention as it began to lose it at just the right moments. and the message about how one learns to cope/live with tragedies/sudden changes, was a great premise, didn't dislike it enough to toss a negative. liked the few bits and pieces that added up to my almost giving it a positive. so, I'll remain neutral as I feel it could use more polish, bit more streamlining at the start, bit more buildup to the reveal.

yes i am ignoring capitalization btw.

nice tale, in any case.

One word to describe this.
WAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :fluttercry::raritycry::pinkiesad2::ajsleepy:
SUCH A GOOD STORY!!!! I APPLAUD YOU!!!!
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:
Best story ever.

Dude let me tell you. You read my fanfiction, so I decided to check you out. Let me tell you THIS WAS GREAT! It moved me emotionally and it was all around just great!:heart::pinkiehappy::heart:

This was pretty good. I'll give it my thumbs up. The open-ended finish was a nice touch, and the repetition effective. You get my thumbs up. Thanks for writing this.

2284100 I almost cried, I have to admit. Almost, but... I think Katawa Shoujo kicked my feels in the feels, and caused my feels' feels to feel feelingly and now my feels don't feel the feels when they get hit, because it's not as hard as KS hit.

Darn, that was sad and the bittersweet ending just made it worse. Have a thumbs up.

2284050 Not to start a comment war or anything, but there had to be a little nicer way to say that this story did not strike your fancy.:unsuresweetie:

2346529
Oh, come on, he said it very nicely the way he did. I wasn't expecting everyone to cry over this and he didn't, I'm fine with that and he left on a very decent note.

2346544 Honestly, it was the last little bit that bugs me.

I knew it was building up to something. The last two paragraphs killed me. :fluttershyouch:

2467946
The hell took you so long to read this?

2468345 Rather, I forgot to comment.I liked/faved long time ago.

this... this is amazing

1) Finish story.
2) Try not to cry.
3) Cry lots.

Nicely done TwizzleDragon, your short but sad story was enough to bring me to tears.

Strange isn't it? How we can relate to characters from a child's cartoon show. And even stranger how they can bring us to feel emotions.

Funny how that is, isn't it? Anyway, overall that was a really good read. :raritywink:

:fluttershysad:
Come on man, don't cry!
:applecry:
I can't help it! The feels!
:fluttercry:
C'mon man, If you start crying I'll start crying!
:applecry:
I can't stop man! Just let me cry!
:fluttershyouch:
Not gonna cry... Not gonna cry
:fluttershbad:
OH WHO AM I KIDDING!?

Ereday I'm shuffling.

Smoke weed Ereday.

As a true sweetie belle fan i say this is all too true!!!!!:raritycry:

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