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ThatOneYellowPony


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When Rarity opens the door to her old room she notices the monstrous collection of stuff has literally pressed right up against the door. Whatever she decides to keep is going to her new home the Carousel Boutique, which is having space issues of its own. What's a lady to do?

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Nice little story. It fits with her organized chaos methods that she would be a pack rat.
I hope to see more from you. This would be well writen for an experienced author.

:twilightsmile:
I like this.

I have similar difficulties.

Grah, these short little one-shots are always so hard to think of anything worthwhile to say. Hmm... unga bunga chunga wunga. How's that? No? Well then, I'll just hang my head in shame while I try to think of something better. :ajsleepy:

You know, stories like this remind you how, other than Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, we never have gotten much answer about how well the rest of the Mane Six knew each other before Twilight came to town.

Anyway, nice little nostalgia inducer. Now I'm suddenly listening to a bunch of music I almost forgot about for quite a while.

I loved it!:heart:

awwe applause.. a classic :pinkiehappy::twilightblush:

Rarity is such a dragon, I mean she has a big hoard of junk. Why would you keep someone else's baby pictures? Kinda creepy...

slot in chicken-scratch (no pun intended)

the "(no pun intended)" can be edited out here, it's not really serving a purpose here

I doubt anyone much comes here nowadays (especially since the actual author's been gone for three years!) but still: this has its ups and downs. On the negative side of the ledger, I can't believe Rarity would ever think of cutie marks as "butt stamps" and there's some really distracting LUS. On the positive side, the play scene with Rarity and Fluttershy is absolutely adorable. It may be worth reading this for that scene alone.

That was a good story.

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