How do we start this? Let's start with from the beginning: Dinky has noticed that she has a little crush on somepony. And she finally has decided to tell the special somepony at a sleepover that Dinky has invited her to. Who is this special somepony? Read and find out!
"Jeez, I wonder how Sweetie Belle is going to react to Dinky's feelings?"
"Um.......Cameron?"
"Yeah Taythen?"
"You're still typing."
"Dammit!"
(Description, title, and tags has been changed from it's original thoughts for plot changes. But, still rated teen for mild cussing.)
Chapters (2)
i like it
and please make more chapters for this story and all of your incomplete stories too on your account
3589806 Yeah.
I haven't done that well for the others.
3589968 ok and yeah
We need a name for this ship...
3590044 DinkyBelle?
Please make more. This story is so cute!
You did a great job creating it.
3590114 Better than what I've got, and trust me I've made some good pairing names.
3590148 Thank you.
3590241 dude this is so good I really wanna help you write the next chapter
3631797 Fuck! Thanks.
3631814
No problem! Glad I could help
"It's better, now that you're here."
Dinky and Sweetie Belle buried themselves under the covers. Both fillies cuddled up together and yawned. "Goodnight Sweetie Belle." Dinky kissed Sweetie Belle on the lips and then laid her head on a pillow.
3635637 Thank you. I'll get on it.
I noticed there was a word missing near the beginning.
Should it be
?
Yay!! it was awesome
3995095 Oops. I mean, I don't know what you're talking about. *sweat starts forming on face*
Cute, touching, well-written, and well-paced. Enjoying this story quite a bit, and looking forward to any future chapters.
4145978 Thank you for all the feedback that you've been laying around on my other stories. Greatly appreciate it.
Will this continue?
4854153 Yes.
More or else I will release the pinkiepie
4863908 Celestia, help me!
MOAR
shipping name
swinky
This book continues after
I understand
There are only four acceptable excuses for why there isn't more:
• Life
• Writing other stories
• Boredom with story
• You lost the sticky note.
AND IT BETTER NOT BE THE FOURTH ONE!
7491006
What about loss of muse
isn't the image NSFW ?
Nothing against the author, but why was this just added in another group with the last chapter being from four years ago?
9141465
It was me who added it, not the author. The author sadly disappeared two years ago and never bothered to continue this story after making large promises that he will.
9141631
I just never understood why stories like that are added into groups. I mean if they would put it at least into a "not finished" folder, it would be better. When I started on fimiction it was so annoying to always think "ah and interessting story", only to find out it wasn't continues since three years or longer.
(I know that the author hasn't added it, but I didn't wanted him to think I disliked the story personally).
9141645
It is annoying, finding a story and then seeing it's unfinished. But even unfinished stories have value and deserve to be found.
If I could contact the author, I would motivate him to let this story getting moved onto my recently-made archive account, so that perhaps another willing author can be found who continues it.
Although, there might be something new happening to this story soon..... Can't tell you what yet, but keep an eye on this story's comments, something might be popping up here.
9144059
Well like i said, sometimes it could at least be put in some sort of "old unfinished stories" folder.
What a beautiful story, it's a shame that it is on hiatus though, and looks like you left the fandom. Well, I am happy what we have anyways, especially this story. Dinky X Sweetie is something unique that we hardly ever see these days.^^