• Member Since 11th Aug, 2013
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My name is Cameron. I am a musician, a writer, a singer, and a member of the band Bless Our Demise. My stories are mainly sad because I believe in expressing my emotions through stories...and songs.


How do we start this? Let's start with from the beginning: Dinky has noticed that she has a little crush on somepony. And she finally has decided to tell the special somepony at a sleepover that Dinky has invited her to. Who is this special somepony? Read and find out!

"Jeez, I wonder how Sweetie Belle is going to react to Dinky's feelings?"


"Yeah Taythen?"

"You're still typing."


(Description, title, and tags has been changed from it's original thoughts for plot changes. But, still rated teen for mild cussing.)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 34 )

i like it :pinkiehappy: and please make more chapters for this story and all of your incomplete stories too on your account

3589806 Yeah. :twilightblush: I haven't done that well for the others.

We need a name for this ship...:ajsleepy:

Please make more. This story is so cute! :rainbowkiss: You did a great job creating it.

3590114 Better than what I've got, and trust me I've made some good pairing names.

3590241 dude this is so good I really wanna help you write the next chapter

I'm also going to tell Dinky my real feelings. I'm done keeping it to myself. I want her to know that I want to be more than friends. /quote]

You probably mean Sweetie Belle

"It's better, now that your here."

"It's better, now that you're here."

Dinky and Sweetie Belle buried themselves under the covers. Both fillies cuddled up together and yawned. "Goodnight Sweetie Belle." Dinky kissed Sweetie Belle on the lips and than laid her head on a pillow.

Dinky and Sweetie Belle buried themselves under the covers. Both fillies cuddled up together and yawned. "Goodnight Sweetie Belle." Dinky kissed Sweetie Belle on the lips and then laid her head on a pillow.

I noticed there was a word missing near the beginning.

Derpy walked into the living to see her filly staring at the door.

Should it be

Derpy walked into the living room to see her filly staring at the door.


Yay!! it was awesome:pinkiehappy:

3995095 Oops. I mean, I don't know what you're talking about. *sweat starts forming on face*

Cute, touching, well-written, and well-paced. Enjoying this story quite a bit, and looking forward to any future chapters.

4145978 Thank you for all the feedback that you've been laying around on my other stories. Greatly appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

More or else I will release the pinkiepie :pinkiecrazy:

shipping name
This book continues after
I understand

There are only four acceptable excuses for why there isn't more:
• Life
• Writing other stories
• Boredom with story
• You lost the sticky note.

isn't the image NSFW ?

Nothing against the author, but why was this just added in another group with the last chapter being from four years ago?


It was me who added it, not the author. The author sadly disappeared two years ago and never bothered to continue this story after making large promises that he will.

I just never understood why stories like that are added into groups. I mean if they would put it at least into a "not finished" folder, it would be better. When I started on fimiction it was so annoying to always think "ah and interessting story", only to find out it wasn't continues since three years or longer.

(I know that the author hasn't added it, but I didn't wanted him to think I disliked the story personally).


It is annoying, finding a story and then seeing it's unfinished. But even unfinished stories have value and deserve to be found.
If I could contact the author, I would motivate him to let this story getting moved onto my recently-made archive account, so that perhaps another willing author can be found who continues it.

Although, there might be something new happening to this story soon..... Can't tell you what yet, but keep an eye on this story's comments, something might be popping up here. :raritywink:

Well like i said, sometimes it could at least be put in some sort of "old unfinished stories" folder.

What a beautiful story, it's a shame that it is on hiatus though, and looks like you left the fandom. Well, I am happy what we have anyways, especially this story. Dinky X Sweetie is something unique that we hardly ever see these days.^^

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