For Vinyl Scratch, the entire world isn't in color, but in sound. Yet for all her love of her musical art, she doubts her work at times. When Pinkie Pie's two sisters are due to visit Ponyville suddenly, Vinyl is the one who is to provide music for the welcoming party. Yet the need to create new music for the gathering brings up Vinyl's doubts and forces her to investigate what sisterhood might "sound" like. And as she encounters one of Pinkie's sisters, she learns that one's talents are a part of who they are. And that talent is not whether you do something better than somepony else, but if you love what you do and give it your all.
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This a fine example of what a slice-of-life fic should be. It is simple but sweet, with excellent descriptions as Vinyl tries to contemplate the world as sound, from colors to sisterhood. You have done a damn good job. I do have one question, is Vinyl truly blind or just completely color blind?
1861247 She is truly blind, as implied by her "still eyes" (which is why she wears sunglasses all the time). And I'm really glad you liked it! I was nervous about this as I've never written fimfiction before. Or anything MLP before. Making sure all the "everyone"s became "everypony"s was a challenge.
1861967 Ah... thanks for clearing that up, I wasn't sure though I was leaning towards her being truly blind. If this was your first MLP fic then I look forward to seeing what you do after this.
1861986 Yeah, I'm really new here. I don't even know how to use the site. At first I "replied" to you by just commenting. Then I realized I could actually reply straight up. *face/hoof* This will take awhile...
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You'll get used to it Milady.
This story was great. One of the best "slic of life"s I've read. Saw a grammar mistake here and there but mostly clean. This was great and hope you continue writing.
Wow, this definitely deserves more attention than it has! Great job and it was a pleasure to read
Very well done!