Special thanks to Regidar for inspiring me. He was the one who gave me the idea of them meeting in the story when Ditzy destroys something. This story is a Ditzydash ship. Read Ch.0 for an explanation of the events leading up to the story (Set two years after all current episodes.) This is just a thank you to Gecko. I might have subconsciously gotten some inspiration from your story Derp With A Dash. COMMENTS WELCOME AND ENCOURAGED.
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Im giving it a thumbs up (obviously) and im going to fav it to see how it goes. Though i havnt a clue where its going to go from this (mainly because i didnt understand it, sorry
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All comments deleted were written by me and a friend, and do not partain to this story... I am not deleting other people's comments.
YES Already have insperation for next few chapters. It came in the form of the song I'll Be Waiting by Mandopony. look it up. Here is a hint, listen to the song first.
OMG SHE'S SO FRICKEN CUTE!
I repeat, all above comments that were deleted had nothing to do with the story and were a random conversation born out of my writers block and sheer boredom.
(What's this... OMG Blue Thunder's working on his story again...) Yes I know, I've been busy helping some people, but I will attempt to finish another chapter today.
crap, I just realized how short this chapter was. Not to worry the next one will be much longer. I might come back to this one and lengthen it a bit but not right now. ENJOY
I liked Derpy the way she was, and now she seems more self-conscious about herself. I am worried about her. overall, It is a good story so far, and I hope nothing bad happens to Derpy (I will call her Derpy because that will always be my name for her). can't wait to read more, please don't tell me what you are going to do with the story next because I want to be surprised, and good luck.
i love derpy just how she is why did have sessions with twilight we love you derpy
HELLO!!!!!!!!!! COMRADE!!!!!!!!!
Well, here's someone I haven't seen in a fair few months, if your willing, we should catch up sometime. But enough with the pleasantries, even though its been months and let us get on with the review, though it may lack in standards as I have not given a review in ........ god doesn't know how long.
A short chapter may it be, it still had some interesting features. The fact that derpy/ditzy is losing the gift of intelligence, given by twilight, is a real grabber to almost any reader. I also liked that rainbow dash is in with Da group, in with Da posse, that she knows people, y'know, that could make a good story, rainbow knowing people, making her way up the ladder of power, having a gang and ruling the streets of Ponyville and expanding outwards Till reach canterlot, then they have a war with the city guard.... I'm rambling on a bit aren't I?
What is this!?! You cannot be Devon Manaseri, where his work contained many a punctuation and spelling mistake, I see non here visible to a read.
Overall I give it 4/5
This is because it could have contained a bit more detail and would have therefore been longer.
Don't forget, pm me if you want to catch up, don't if ya don't, ok dude, love long and tolerate.