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greydoran


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If I can be allowed to ask, who's next on the chopping block?

2362873 Who needs more love, and more to love? I'm trying to be fresh and unexpected, throw me some suggestions.

I would personally like to see Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Spitfire feed Soarin pie.

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I'd like to see Fluttershy being fattened by Pinkie Pie.

I would love to see Twilight being fattened by spike

This doesn't happen to be inspired by a particular mini comic, eh..?

I wanna see Discord feeding Luna or being feed Celestia

A storyline! I'm impressed. Seriously, I'm impressed.

Well, we could have somepony stuff Lightning Dust a bit. Have her visit Pony Joe to drown her sorrows, and Joe, after witnessing the joys of filling other ponies up with his produce (no pun intended) gives her another round. And another. And another.

You'd have all the common pony tribes covered, too!

Im guessing that photo finish decided to get another model and fatten her up? My guess. But, i await another chapter

Chubby soarin?! I like where this is headed

I don't get it, do you like buts?

Begining:
Fat soar, yes!
End:
*flips table*

But dont get me wrong, i still love this

You taunting dick, that being said I love you:pinkiecrazy:

Hello my good sir, are you still taking request at the moment? If so, will you take mine?

Also, when you mean gay, do you mean m/m and/or f/f?

2398782 Of course I'm still taking requests! Just tell ol' Doran your deepest desires, and he'll see to it they get fulfilled.

I'm okay with m/m and f/f, straight is okay too, and if there happens to be some magical third gender I'm unaware of, by all means tell me and I'll stuff it with cake.

*whips out notepad*

So what's your order, hon?

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Well my good sir, I would like to first order is that can you another fatty Soarin chapter, him being coupled with Braeburn. As for the plot, hmm I have somewhat of an idea, but I like to hear yours.

Please respond.

2399101 Well, I've got a bit of a storyline going on through these four chapters that may or may not culminate in F. Scott Fitzgerald attacking Ernest Hemingway with a crowbar. Probably not, since I do enjoy my porn to have some plot coherency.
And I'm sorry, but Soarin/Braeburn isn't a pairing I'm willing to do ever. SoarinBurn is to m/m what TwiDash is to f/f. Come on, we're in the fetish corner of the internet, some originality is expected.
But let's hear your plot idea, maybe it's halfway decent, who knows.

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Alright, no Soarburn than, I'll respect that. Then how about Soarin/Donut Joe(Is that his name right?) then or Soarin/Big Mac? :pinkiehappy:

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Hey Grey! :pinkiesmile:

So is my request acceptable in my last comment or what? :rainbowhuh:

Please respond.

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As for the plot, hmm I have somewhat of an idea

Sure dude, speak to me.

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Wiat are you asking for my plot ideas for SoarinxMac and/or SoarinxDonutJoe?

Or are you asking only to my first request to you, SoarinxBraeburn?

2405026 Yes. All that. Tell me stuff. I like stuff. Tell me every goddamn thing that pops into your head that I can turn into a plot for horse porn. All of it.

2394938 Nah, I'm more of a moob-lover. That's why there have been exactly zero of those in this entire story. Do stallions even have those? Wow, looks like it's time to do some research and when I say research I mean read a whole lot of clop.

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For the SoarinxBraeburn one, this is its plot, short and simple as I make it:

The Wonderbolts decided to do an airshow in an smaller town, Appleloosa.

Soarin, the overweight Wonderbolt stallion, decide to tryout the apple varieties of pastries(mostly pies) of the earth pony settlement before running into a certain Apple family member, who gave him quick tour of his small town.

Braeburn, being hospitable to the fat pale blue pegasi and attracted to him as well, invited him to his home to bake all apple goods(Something most of the Apple family can do) to feed him and since having an endless supply of apples and Soarin's gluttony, all I see is an immobile blobby Soarin in the future.
Or something like that.

I'll post the other two plot ideas of SoarinxMac and SoarinxDonutJoe in next comment.

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My idea for the SoarinxBigMac request you can use and modify:

Soarin was given a break for a month to loose all the flab.

Soarin decides to go to Ponyville to try out Sweet Apple Acres' apple pies and famous cider.
Soarin arrives to the small town with great difficulty.

Pinkie Pie throws party for him, which he goes on gluttonous eating spree on the sweets and cake.

He unaware catches the attention of a certain large red stallion. Somewhere near the end of the party, Big Mac introduces himself to Soarin and offer him a place of residence on his farm free of charge, while offering the fat pale blue pegasi his secret stash of hard cider and maybe his family's famous apple pie. Soarin accepts.

I can leave the rest to your imagination.

2405332>>2410665 You said something about Donut Joe? Keep going, I've been thinking of adding more of him anyway.

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The SoarinxDonutJoe one? Alrighty.

Having weekly break from his career as a Wonderbolt, the fatso Soarin decide to travel Canterlot which became the place for fatty goods in all types, going to the one place that help the blob trend grow, Donut Joe's (I forgot the name of his shop. :facehoof: Silly me.) to feed his large growing hunger.

So hungry, in fact, he ordered everything Donut Joe has. At near the end of Soarin's gluttonous feast of pastries, Donut Joe ask if he has enough bits to pay for it all.

Turns out, Soarin only has enough to pay for most of it. Joe had an idea of how Soarin can pay for the rest of his eating spree. Things get a bit... intimate if you wish.

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So which one of the three do you prefer to do first, beside other things you want to write of course? :pinkiesmile:

I'm not sure if I can do "obscure". There's at least semi-canon with Twist and the boy she gave her card to.

Wait, that could be something- remember the other girl who wanted to give him a card? Tootsie Flute? She was crushed when Twist was faster. It would make sense for her to look for somepony else, right? And if she likes 'em plus-sized, she might very well decide to fill him up to her liking. How about Featherweight? He's a stick. I bet he'd bloat up nicely!

Though, the other kid who'd make a good victim star would be Snips, I think. He's already kind of rotund, you just need somepony else who wants to see him get bigger! Maybe one of the snobs, like Silver Spoon or Diamond Tiara. I wouldn't be surprised if they believe having a bloat beau is extremely fashionable now. The great Rarity has her blimply prince now, after all.

Obscure, obscure... how about- Trixie returning to the rock farm to get revenge on Pinkie's dad? Or somepony getting nabbed by Diamond Dogs, who decide they need to make sure their prisoner doesn't run away rather than have them dig. They can always use them for... amusement.

Or Zecora might run into Queen Chrysalis, who's looking for a new source of love. She brews her a love poison, gets her hooked up with some lonely pony, and suddenly, she's got more love than she'd ever need. More than she can just digest and burn off, at least, since besides staring into each other's eyes, they won't be doing much!

2413417 Donut Joe gets another chapter. That's the perfect storyline for who I have planned, but I just couldn't figure out how to get the two of them performing 'activities'. It's hard enough when my inner absurdist keeps trying to turn my clop into an existential deconstruction thereof, but I couldn't for the life of me get that one! Thanks!

2414924 Vunderbar. Simply vunderbar.

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Ooh! I believe I have another story idea you can use.

This one, however, staring KingSombraxShiningArmorx(Maybe)Cadence. With Sombra being the fatty of course.

Also I notice in chapter 5, you gave Spitfire boobs. Can you give Soarin and other stallions moobs since you said your a moob-lover?

I also have another request:

Morbidly obese Spitfire, being fed by Rainbow Dash - a feeder Spitdash kinda thing. Please. Please.

I absolutely love this, but there are quite a few typos and a MASSIVE WALL OF TEXT.

If you can fix this, then that would be excellent.

2415309 That was sarcastic, although the idea of crotchmoobs does intrigue me. I might have to look into it.

2415309 Well, I'm sure a thousand years trapped in ice can't be healthy. I bet he's downright freezing!

2416680 I'll think about it, but you know how fickle muses can be.

2416686 What's this about typos? Spellcheck comes up blank except for names and sound effects. And I'm not sure what you mean by 'wall of text'. Do you want me to double space?

So what are you planning for us all in the chapter, greydoran?

2425677 Well, everyone's suggestions have been filed and are all under consideration, but I had an idea the other night that just wouldn't leave me alone. Have a clue.
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Trust me, this is relevant and not just me screwing with you. Why would I screw with you? If you like my work you've got enough problems already, I don't need to add confusion to that list.

Hmm, kinky. :pinkiehappy:

So what is next? An orgy/feeding frenzy or something?

Braeburn being fattened or otherwise expanded by Big Macintosh, or vice versa.
:yay:

Hey Grey! Hope you are still accepting suggestions and such, because I have one you may like. :pinkiesmile:

Main characters: Big Macintosh and Filthy Rich

Subject that is to be fattened up: Big Macintosh

Plot you could use and modify: Due to the ‘Immense New Style’ that is sweeping across Equestria and perhaps beyond, ponies of immense wealth and great standing in the business world started to exploit this new occurrence, ponies such as Fancy Pants or better yet Filthy Rich.

For Filthy Rich, he use a bit of his resources to create products tied to the ‘Immense New Style’ or least help promote it more, but he needs somepony to test them and sent an ad through Ponyville for such ponies to hire.

Meanwhile, winter season has befallen upon Ponyville, and a certain hardworking crimson stallion was looking for a job to do since all the farm work is done for this season and came across a certain ad that will pay for plenty of bits.

Uh, that is all I have. Do you think you can work with this?

Please respond.

2448596 Well, Mac's already booked, but I'm totally gonna use that premise. Maybe I could use Pinkie or something, gotta appeal to other demographics after all.

Now, I've got a bit of a question: was That Sexy Older Guy Thing any good? I was experimenting a little, and I don't really like what I did with it.

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Meh, it was alright if a bit kinky. :twilightsmile:

By the way, I hope you haven't wrote any chapters for Big Mac cuz I don't know if this sounds weird of a suggestion/request to you, but can you make Big Mac bottom heavy? I mean, make some of his weight/fat go to his flanks/plot/rump/butt/waist?

2448929 I do love me some ass... You've got yourself a deal, pardner!

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