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(borderline) incestuous undertones

I didn't see this when I pre-read. I wanna see now. :pinkiehappy:

Well that was really interesting. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I think my opinion of this story can be summed up in one image:


WOW such good English presented in this clop !! Nice work !!

wow... that was amazing... I would love to see another chapter of this in Octavia's perspective, however

Best OctaScratch I've read in a loooooong time.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I don't normally read clop, but when I do, I read good ones. (Please get that reference)
And bucking creepy ones too. The spanking part was a bit.... Weird.

As deeply engaging as it is to watch a middle aged homosexual fashion designer hit on a colt accused of non-consensual dessert rape, I think I’ve seen enough of that for tonight.

And this part tore me out of my other side. :rainbowlaugh:

5112180 thx for the pic. I hope MPD doesn't end up scaring the shit out of the author, or deleting this story....
It would make me sad.:fluttercry:

Octavia with her tongue inside me is Shakes Spear with a quill and ink, The Wonderbolts with flight patterns, Trenderhoof with… whatever the fuck it is that makes him a self proclaimed ‘genius’.

No superlatives to describe this. None.

A quick internet search showed me that the artist swaetshrit is responsible for drawing your stories cover art. Don't you know how to search by image?


5112296 Jesus Christ I love your avatar. #baneisbestvillain


THat actually means a lot coming from you. I'm hardly even being sarcastic either.


I'm honored at that, considering I'm just a guy who reads.

~Skeeter The Lurker


Yeah, but you're kind of a Folk Hero around here. Like Robin Hood, only with more semen and fetish sex.


Ironic that... I'm more of a vanilla guy. Dunno why...

~Skeeter The Lurker


No superlatives to describe this. None.

*ahem* there are numerous qualities which make Trenderhoof well above the average deviation of the pony population intelligence quotient, thus earning him the rank of 'genius'. To list all of the ways that Trenderhoof is amazing and sexy would take incalculable aeons, thus, I must retreat to my somber solace of solitude, to reflect once more on the greatness, which is the Trenderhoof.

Octavia smoking a joint reminded me of Titty Sparkles' Profile picture.
Good story doh.

Comment posted by Guy_Incognito deleted June 2nd

The Orphans are a criminal organisation now, aren't they?


Vanilla is the worst flavour of Ice Cream. Most people prefer Rocky Road.

5113530 Neither confirm or deny, huh?

Well, this was amazing. The dialogue was great, realistic even, and the sex too.
The story had this "mature" and "real" feeling too it that I look for in most fanfiction.
Thank you for a good read!

And a big plus for the pairing, one of my favs.

I had such wonderful hopes for this story. Why? Why did I, for even a moment, forget to expect that this was going to involves drugs? Good job, you killed my erection. I'm going to go kill a mother rat now and hope she screams horribly. Good day Sir, and you can go fuck yourself for ruining what was my only time to jerk this week. :eeyup:

The picture of Fluttershy that is your avatar invalidates your entire comment.

Oh my god is that an American Psycho reference I see?:rainbowkiss:

Dat illustration though! O///O

Thank you, I decided to go with Abomination this time around.

THIS is your first attempt at F/F writing? :rainbowhuh: U srs?

This was great in pretty much every way. While I didn't get much sexually out of this (spanking isn't really my bag), this was just in and of itself a very well written story. The sex itself was well written, especially for your first attempt at F/F material. Everything leading up to Octavia's apartment was fantastically worded and really seemed to put me in the world. I'm so invested in the story at this point that I would really like to see where their lunch appointment the next day might lead.

Thank you very much for writing this. It was quite a treat. :twilightsmile:

I'd love to have more in this setting. This Octavia is very interesting... but, also seems somewhat broken. I'm as curious as Vinyl to know more about her.

Well, let's put it this way. Say your mother was now utterly infested with tentacles inside her body, and she began to become altered in many ways. Would you consider her not herself anymore?

5115001 I thought long and hard how to answer that question but I just couldn't I was speechless for a good 30 seconds. :moustache:


Well, this was an unexpected surprise. While I admit the drug usage was a bit of a turn-off for me, it added life and believability to the scene, so it served its purpose. The fleshed out descriptions as well as the intricate and varied word choice really makes this work shine. When all the buildup made way for the scene itself, I was not disappointed. You struck the perfect balance between description and pacing, and it shows. I'm very happy I got to experience this sweet little rush of depravity. I give this work a 10/10 for total excellence. For everything I've mentioned here today, this work is memorable, wonderful, and perfect. I hope to read what you produce in the future. Have a wonderful life, Guy_Incognito. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors. Also, if you wouldn't mind, could you tell me why Octavia behaved the way she did? It seemed very unusual to me, and if you can explain to us or even want to, I would greatly appreciate it.

My, my, my... I'm so happy someone recommended I read this story. For a story that's just over 13k in words, I never found myself bored of reading it. The sex scene was great and the spanking fetish was handled very properly as well. On top of that, the style of writing, and the descriptions of things from Vinyl's perspective were indeed fun to read.

Also this:

There isn't a single cigarette on the top half of the cigarette case, instead, there are four or five perfectly rolled joints that look like punctuation marks. Fat at the top, thin at the bottom.

That... I loved that more then you realized.


Thanks. I'm glad to hear you liked it.

In this situation, I honestly believe, if Flutters couldn't be cured by magic or alchemy, that the best thing to do would be to put her down. It's like if a family member were to become infected with a zombie virus. No matter how far-fetched it seems, the implications are still there. Could you allow a loved one like Flutters to suffer such a fate? I wouldn't.

On a side note, my mother told me, as we were pulling into the parking lot of Wal-Mart and saw an elderly couple slowly (extremely slowly) getting into their car and the old man was helping his wife, that if she ever got like that that I should shoot her. Same concept, I suppose.

5114314 I've met people like that and they are fucked up. No holds bar. I mean I'm petty fucked up (the number of anti-depressents, and other drugs (that I'm not even sure what they do) make that pretty obvious) however people like that are usually fucked up beyound belief. And I've spent the last 3 (or was it 4?) years in a psyche ward!!! :flutterrage: so there's basically no use denighing my statement... unless said pills are just having an adverse effect again and I'm currently talking to a toaster again. :rainbowhuh:

Aaaaannndd... Cue song getting stuck in head.

5113711 what the fuck man. its just weed

I have my opinions, you have yours. I find it absolutely disgusting, while you may not. No harm done, I just wanted to make a scene because honesty, that was my only time to jerk this week (And I felt like getting pseudo-upset because I rarely get upset). I've done so many dump runs, and it's just Wednesday. (I do a lot of home improvement for others.)

Ya lost me at the mommy part.
Well writen just not my cup of tea I guess.


Fair enough. I'm glad you at least enjoyed as much of it as you did.

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