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k............so i just read that
I almost started laughing off the bat at
because it reminded me of Stonershy.
I noticed a few mistakes here and there, and almost instantaneously thought of the fix. But, I truly enjoyed this story, and seeing as it hasn't been classified as 'Complete', I can only guess that there will be more chapters?
And by the end of this, I felt full. Like, I had eaten what Celestia did. So it must be truly fantastic story telling, to fool my body into thinking this happened to it.
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Wouldn't you mind copy / paste the incrimined sentences and send me a pm with them? At this point I doubt I could find more without a native english speaker help. Or google docs, whatever you prefer.
I'm thinking 4 chapters total but nothing is definitive yet. The original command was much more depraved, so I'm weighting the options.
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You should read my porn them.
Firstly, that was the strangest thing I've ever read on this website.
Secondly, that was the most arousing thing I've ever read on this website.
Please continue
That was interesting...
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Working on it.
Don't mind the infrequent visits, I'm not often around outside release weeks. More active on DA and FA.
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Thanks, fixing it now. 3 and 6 are intended.
Probably not soon but certainly faster than this one.
So I finally remembered to actually read this on my computer and leave an actual comment (usually I'm on my phone)...
VERY VERY GOOD.
Like, quite possibly my all-time favorite story of this...particular flavor.
Don't want to continue expounding my love for this. It would make me seem creepy.
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It's only creepy if you tell people you know
3391894 ...Well shit...
1859938 So true
I love this so much, MAKE THE STORY LONGER!!!! please
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Chapter 3 will be posted eventually, it's too close to be done for me to not bother finishing it. Unfortunately I can't really predict when I'll be in the mood to write.
I'm commissioning stuff from dufel on my FA at the moment (that I can't post here for obvious reason), I'm in one of these procrastination episodes where I can't finish writing chapter 3 even if it's 3/4 done, and it's much easier for me to write storyboards and make someone draw them for me than write stories in decent english.
I will comish another serie as soon as he has the time to draw again, so if you like the first one check FA from time to time.
Revel should be reveal. Also, what are those dashes at the beginning for?
5464600 Thanks, fixed.
EEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! ITS BACK!!!!
Is this story going to be updated? I hope it isn't dead....
I did notice a few words and wordings that seemed a bit odd/out of place, but I still say you did quite well! Congratulations!