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Ayaline
I'll gladly proofread/edit anything non-judgmentally if you need help. Just send me a message and I'll do my best! :3
Ayaline
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As this is my first fanfic, I would appreciate any constructive criticism. I don't have a proofreader-- please don't bite my head off!
Anyways, I hope you all enjoy!
I wonder where this could go from here........ Continue
Honestly, i really enjoyed reading this
I like it, the ending could have been better but its a great story otherwise
maybe you should read my story...its also my first and id love to hear your opinion 
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so far so good
Like it Love it.......
1603603 You're absolutely right, the ending could have been a lot better. Silly me.
But in general, thank you guys for the good feedback!
Never thought Twilight would use her horn for THAT.
"It's nothing major, and please, you don't have to be so formal, Celestia will be fine for now." Princess Celestia inquired
The above is not a inquiry.
1608578 Silly me~ fixed that.
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very nice :D continue!
You have my attention... continue, please.
Pretty good. The feels are there, and the clop wasn't bad at all! I'm looking forward to more of this!
assinine part.: genaric twilunestia, and very basic structure.
good part.: loved it every bit of the way a few improvements here and their and you got yourself a beautiful story.
cheers
Nice clopfic.
*whistles* Nice clopfic.
I liked this, keep it up.
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And maybe I did
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Now, do excuse me for my pedantry; but it can be taken as contradictory that you love the story and you believe it resembles an ass. Asininity is indicative of something one would find of the utmost rankings of idiocy; ergo using that word to call attention to simplistic syntax and a commonplace shipping is as an efficient use of that word as using a small thermonuclear device to treat pubic lice.
1821025 no I was stating about how the first comment could be construed as mean and unkind to the story and author. while the second part was chosen as good. sorry if it didn't come out right my good sir.
Hmmm...A bit static on the plot, and a bit bland on the details, but a promising start nonetheless, please continue.
Me gusta. MUCHO.
this really was one of the greatest, although there were no triggers reads that I have had all morning and no errors, to boot.
3514783 No errors you say? I'm so glad to hear that! I'm my own editor, and being a grammar nazi at times sure helps.
And thank you. 
3514790 I have always understood the need for perfection, but I do not always strive for perfection, I strive to do my best.
Good one.
3519297 Thank you!
Thanks for the fic!