Rarity stops by Sugarcube Corner to drop off a few gifts for Pinkie Pie.
simple little thing originally written for the Quills and Sofas' Hearts and Hooves Day 2024: Coffee Shop AU Speedwrite, where it placed 3rd, but now cleaned up and edited a tad.
The prose here is really nice! You've managed to bring in these little human (pony?) details in a way that doesn't interrupt the flow or story telling.
It's a cute bittersweet story, those last few lines are especially good.
I like this Pinkie. She knows where she's at and she likes it.
Still love this fic. Beautifully done, metronome!