Nate Wright is a sixth grader who wants to prove his awesomeness to the world. He's also a master cartoonist, but everyone else considered him the master of detentions. He was fairly athletic, with a flair of humor and no chance of being lame (in his eyes, that is). But after when he and his friends along with Brad Gunter messed with Gina's invention they got transported to Equestria. During their time there they need to stop an evil king named Sombra who threatens to take Equestria by force. Can they stop him? Or will they be plunged in darkness?
This is based on the best selling books and the hit TV show!
Chapters (13)
Do you think Francis, Teddy, Chad, and Dee Dee could have crushes on Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie?
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Ooh. I like what you're saying. But who's paired with who? And hold on. Isn't Dee Dee a girl?
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Francis x Fluttershy, Chad x Applejack, and Teddy x Rainbow Dash. Right, maybe Dee Dee with some guy.
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Not bad. I'll see that they can win their hearts along with Nate winning Jenny's
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Do you think Artur could also be in this story?
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Sure. But when would you like him to appear?
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Maybe whenever Nate’s dad and sister look for him.
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Good idea. I will do that.
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Cool.
Maybe Randy could appear whenever Mrs. Godfrey and Gina appear and maybe he could change his ways near the end.
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Sure that would work well.
Maybe you could end this story with the Grand Galloping Gala.
Good job.
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Thanks
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I presume you saw what I suggested for the ending.
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I did. They're great ideas. And I will use them.
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Cool
Good chapter. I kinda imagined King Sombra either sounding similar to Darth Vader or Lord Garmadon from Lego Ninjago.
Don’t you?
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Yes. I mean he is scary looking and his voice sounds a little bit like them.
Since Nate is now a unicorn, maybe his dad and sister could be unicorns while his uncle, along with Artur could be a pegasus.
Do you think Spike and Artur could help Nate and his group rescue the Mane 6?
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Yes they will.
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Cool.
If you want any help with any brief descriptions for Celestia and Luna’s royal dresses, I can give you some.
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I sure do need help.
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Maybe something similar to these, only in EqG colors:
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They will work great for the Gala!
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As for the Mane 6, maybe they could wear the gala dresses featured in the Make New Friends but Keep Discord episode.
I’m pretty sure using copyrighted lyrics is against the site rules. You might want to consider sticking with the instrumental version.
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Ok got rid of the lyrics and stuck with the instrumental version.
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Cool
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I thought it be cool for them training. But without the lyrics can do.
Looking forward to the last chapters: defeating Sombra and Godfrey and the Grand Galloping Gala
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They will be the best!
Good job. Looking forward to the Grand Galloping Gala.
Maybe you could do a sequel where the Awesome Eight face off against Chrysalis.
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Maybe. We'll see. But that is a good idea.