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When Sunset returned to Equestria through the portal there was nothing left alive. Equis was essentially dead, until she returned, was transformed into an alicorn, and gained a new partner to take over the world... an empty world that needs rebuilding.

Set in the wasteland timeline Starlight Glimmer created.

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Another story my you ambitious, thou this one seem to be sunset centered.
This giving me fallout vibe for now. let see where it goes.

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Yeah if I get some feedback I might keep it going. It was just a random idea and I’m trying to get those out more. I’m still focused on my main story.

Well i say the interaction are comical in a good way.
Thou such silence here....

So Celestia ether gone DayBreaker and simply somehow went to her sister. How boy Starlight you made quite the mess here wonder if we see her answering for her crime in this fic.
Sunset and Dusk have a long herculine task ahead of them that's for sure.

Well now at least they have a crew :applejackunsure:
Thou should the elements go partially to them. Twilight here too it seems to be pre school game.

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Elements are sticking with their current owners as the girls aren’t fully committed. They might get the geode though later. And yeah the timeline on both sides got messed up.

great chapter, saludos desde argentina

Don't know why but i get scooby doo and fallout vibes that building up. But solid. Chapter.

“Oh fuck, oh fuck, oh fuck.” Sunset had gently carried Twilight and Spike into the break room and laid them on the old couch it contained.

Ya done goofed Sunset now deal with the consiquence! :pinkiecrazy:
Dusk dropping bomb shells what feels like every chapter. :rainbowlaugh:

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Well, wastelands don’t make themselves :rainbowlaugh::facehoof:

So the solitude starts, wonder how long it be before dusk and sunset get married :raritystarry:
In future their be a lot of notices of people going missing and they chilling in Equestria :rainbowlaugh:
Thou how will they repopulate the animal species? Also what of the other intelligent creature's like griffins, dragon's, zebras and so on? Will some humans turn to them? :duck:

“And I am stuck for years as their citizen.” Twilight sighed and cried into her pillow. “Why couldn’t I leave well enough alone.”

Human curiosity both or blessings and bane curse that most likely will get us exterminated.

“True. At least I honestly never expected our plans to work out perfectly in the first place. This is just our first challenge but it also gave a fairly big opportunity.” I raised my wing and gave her a nuzzle causing her to blush.

Wise words, no plan fully survives first contact adjustment are always needed even if minor ones.

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Dragons might have survived. They can eat rocks and take baths in Lava. The sun being up all the time wouldn't necessarily kill them.

Everyone else... Minotaurs might live underground, Dimond Dogs might have also survived.

The hippogriffs might be alive under water as well.

The maid had only passed away a few weeks before Susnet came back and they restarted the day/night cycles. It's possible more made it in the far north and south, the Yaks might have been able to hold out.

The others, save maybe the changlings. Are probably gone and would need transplants from the human world, one would think.

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Good thoughts. Harmony did only say it was her followers who were gone. :raritywink:

While annoying, Rainbow and Fluttershy to a lesser extent will be good to have once they all learn to fly.

Twilight and Sunset should be able to McGuyver up the portal before the full 20 moons are up. So this could be worse.

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Isn’t it 30 moons for a total of 2.5 years a cycle on Equestria? And earth Only synced with equestrian timelines after magic was brought to it?

Will Sunset also have to deal with whatever evil force was responsible for the Wasteland Timeline that Starlight Glimmer accidentally created?

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Not really since Celestia caused most of it in her grief, there will be other baddies and issues though.

I'm really looking forward to where you take this story keep up the good work:rainbowlaugh

Nice interaction and some magic lore I like it.
Personally I have silver and gold have similar affinity to magic but each has it upside like gold having higher capacity while silver purified any taint.
And that iron(and it alloys) ironically is the best conductor but it can't hold magic in itself, as well as warping magic in a way that poisonous to most magic beings in prolonged exposure. Cold iron is the 'best' alloys in this.

The sun later on just shouting HEY YOU YEAH YOU STOP NAPPING AND MOVE ME DOWN

I'm enjoying this story it is a bit sad knowing what happened but that's a alternate universe for ya I hope every thing gets more shaken up like a new chaos spirit or something like that it's already wacky 🤯 and stuff with only 4
mairs and 1 stallion for a unknown time alone together well thay make a herd only the aether knows

Dragon or Roc would be my guess. Hoping for Dragon, at lest you can talk to one of them... maybe. A Roc just seemed to be an animal, powerful and magic resistant, but not much of a conversationalist. Good thing they have a Fluttershy if its one of them.

“True but like Twilight said, science could do some damage. Instead of using magic directly, we could just hurl some projectiles, like swords, really fast.” I gave her a serious look. “I thought about teleporting the armory out when that idiot asked for Flutters.”

Not to burst your bubble sunset but unless you have anti material rounds or tank shells, firearms be as useful as throwing rocks. :rainbowlaugh:
So dragon's are also carnivore fair I suppose, usually I prefer them being omnivores that can eat literally anything as long as it has magic in it.

There was one thing that did concern Ember, something she didn’t share with her group. The look she received by the pony prince when her underlining mentioned eating the yellow one had sent a shiver down her spine and she could have sworn his eyes looked draconian for a few moments.

Interesting for shadowing, so nightmare force found another user or maybe Alicorn are somewhat draconic or it dust who draconic.

I'm enjoying this. I'll be keeping track of this story.

story looks good with the current course it is taking. (Somewhat dark, but then again that is what starlight left no?)

Good story so far. Will they meet Starlight Glimmer and Twilight when they appear in the wasteland? Or has that time already passed?

The beginning with Sunset is a nice thing, but the change of scene with a human is somewhat discordant, that part happens too fast, maybe it needs a rewrite or an edition

In addition to the name of the protagonist, everything else is quite good, if you do not have one of your own you could use the Dust Shine, is the name of my version of Twilight’s genre change, it is not so original but a letter could change a whole story jajajajajajajaja

I now understand what you mean by ambitious, survival fics are either pretty good or they’re pretty boring, I hope with the ideas you have it’s pretty good and you give it an interesting address, especially since it seems that Sunset and Dusk are the only living pony and I am sure that many Human refugees would seek a new life in that desert world (from the good and harmonic to the bad and chaotic)

Although I have a question.... and Discord?

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Becoming DayBreaker... I doubt it, even if he had stayed, but it’s like Sunset says, she gave up, in that timeline she literally lost everything, her student her sister her niece... her daughter, she had no reason to live

maybe, a really big maybe, if Blueblood hadn’t been so shortsighted maybe Celestia would have stayed, but the possibility was much lower than Sunset’s getting good without the need for a Twilight Sparkle

And yes, Starlight did break the timeline, but as long as the flames of an unbreakable will burn, hope will still live

good chapter, but I feel that Dusk sold the idea of the original equestria, which is full of life and harmony, it is assumed that the equestria that exists in that timeline is a desert where natural disasters abound, Dusk surely did not realize his mistake because the element of honesty did not sound before it

I hope it is a problem that is addressed because it is something quite important and that affects each of the girls

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if you mean the Twilight and Starlight of that timeline, maybe, but if you’re referring to Twilight and Starlight time travelers, it’s unlikely that if I’m not mistaken the desert equestria is one of the last time lines visited


This chapter was quite good and showed that there is still intelligent life, it may be the wild dragons but it gives the possibility that there is still thinking life out there

Dusk’s idea of using human science for war is something I agree with, and something necessary in those moments of chaos where peace may not be available, it is not at all Harmonic but it is not that time is...

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