Names Moon Skritch, On a permanent hiatus, I don't think I'll come back. Feel free to read what I have! Thanks for being a good community years ago.
Sequel to Dean's New Life
DISCLAIMER: DO NOT READ THIS DESCRIPTION OR THIS STORY IF YOU HAVEN'T READ MY FIRST ONE "Dean's New Life". I don't want this to spoil anything for new people.
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It was all a dream to Dean Yarlo, All of it, from beginning to end, he is sad day to day remembering that dream and how much he wishes it was real. One Day Alex, his friend asks Dean if he wants to go camping with him and Max, and what they find blows them away...
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Hope you enjoy!
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First chapter of book two up, if you read this and didn't read book 1, sorry for spoiler of book 1. Lemme know if you see anything wrong!
Chapter is up for ya too, i know there are 2 chapters right at the start, but i think i needed more words so it could get past moderation, so i added another chapter. Lemme know if you see anything wrong.
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Why on earth do i have a dislike???
Not everyone will like what someone else writes.
P.S.
It wasn't me, I was just stating a fact.
1394246 Your right... i'm just being stupid Lol
This is great I can wait to see Pinkie Pie break earth physics
1394695 She's Pinkie, she can do anything.
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um duh I wonder what would happen if scientists found Pinkie Pie and saw that saw broke the laws of Physics
1394711 I'm not going to go that far, just saying.
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When's chapter 3 gonna be up?!
1394813 dude chill out. its only been a day. took him 2 days to write this one... i'd say give him a week at least before you start wondering whats going on
MOAR!!!!
1394813>>1395224>>1395481 Do not worry it will be up sooner than you think
1395960 I see what you did there...
wow
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Good... good...
One thing. Can you please separate the speech please? I find it hard to follow who is talking and when. Thanks.
....That did not disapoint. Thanks curiosity!
1396654 I tried to do that... it irritates me for some reason, I don't know why... I like to have at least 3 lines before i hit enter twice to open a new paragraph... I really don't know why i don't like it. It doesn't confuse me at all
ouch poor rainbow alex doesnt remember her or their relationship
i hope he somehow remembers please author dont do this to rainbow dash 
1397170 Fair enough. I can't go against you on that. I will try my hardest to keep up.
1397669 hey if you need help! just ask! i will clarify for you :)
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i dont know if it was perposeful or not but i kinda noticed something about the first book. it might have just been your first time writing a fanfic, but it all seemed to be happening really fast. days would happen with in 2-5 paragraphs even. a lot of dreams that i've had at least had a simaler effect, everthing happening in quick sucession. now the story is a little more... drawn out when compared to the previous book. that could be that your trying to portray a dream before we knew it was a dream... or it could just be accedental awesomeness from first time writing fanfics. either way i love it so far.
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wow, i never thought of it that way... i was just writing it, my skills just got better over time. and people were saying that the story was going too fast, so i decided to make the second book more lengthy, i had no idea that i was doing that. LOL. Glad you like it 
1396776 That curiosity seems to get the better of us all the time!
And now for the very late dose of Listener's comments.
My Gosh. I didn't see this coming at all! And I sorta knew! That is talent my friend.
I think you've got a [ center] >story< [/ center] going on here. Was that on purpose?
Great spin on the story Gareth!
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Yes, yes you have improved!
*sorry for being late.*
1402058 I did not intend for [ center] story [ /center] do you know how to fix it?
EDIT: Nvm fixed it.
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'Tis okay. I've done that before. It's easy to get confused with the BBC code thing going on here.
I've seen even semi-professionals forget a / in one and have half the story italicized. :P
1403228 yeah i forgot the /
So far this is a good story. More so since it shows that Dean wasn't in fact dreaming and that it was more like he physically was still on Earth but mentally and spiritually he went to Equestria. Well that is my opinion of what happened to him. Course that technically means that it kinda was a dream and kinda wasn't. Seriously though don't leave Rainbow Dash heartbroken for long doesn't seem right or fair since they all remember except for him.
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1407478 AND I WILL TELL IT AGAIN
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Next chapter is up, Please tell me if there is anything that doesn't make sense to you. And tell me if you see grammatical errors (Please don't go super grammar nazi on me though).
I hope you enjoyed the chapter.
Thanks Guys /)
--Gareth
This is so cool, i cant wait to see how they do at the mall, this is gonna be so awesome
1411278 < What he said.
quick question... if he dissappered when he woke up from his "dream", and pinkie had the braclet, did his clothes just drop on the floor? i mean i can imagine the shock of some1 dissappering in equestria because of teleportation... but having the person you just married's boby just vanish would be pretty truamatizing. anyway really great story... kinda made me want to write a fan fic idea that i've had for a while. kinda wanted to know other ppls opinion first. ill write a discripton in a blog post if any1 wants to comment on it
well the next chapter is going to be fun
i can just imagine the mane 6 doing all kinds of funny stuff at the mall
I have a feeling that the fact that they are part of a tv show on Earth is going to be revealed at the mall. Either by a fan of the show assuming they are based off hair styles talking about the show or seeing a toy or product based off the show. Either way I cannot see that explination going down well for Dean and Alex.
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Long chapter for you guys, mostly just details of what happens in the mall. Tell me if you see something you don't understand or there is a grammatical error or whatever. Hope you enjoy!
Thanks guys!
--Gareth
Havent read yet but I got to say this LET THE SHENNANIGANS ENSUE
ok now I'm going to read chapter
Well that was a great chapter but I was hoping for some shennanigans going on in the mall ah well I'm sure there will be some shennanigans next time
you know what you should do, have the rest find guys on earth, then watch what happens, heh heh.
I didn't expect them to be so calm about the whole MLP:FIM-thing... Great job, man!
I knew they would find out! Like with Mcayon I didn't think they would take it so well. I know for a fact if I went to a different world and there was a tv show about my life I wouldn't be that calm about it. Course I mainly expected Rainbow Dash to not take it well since she doesn't take most information calmly.