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twow443


I'm your friendly neighborhood riffer. Except when I'm not. I also write pony words and review them. I hope to serve.

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When the unicorn Trixie returns to Ponyville with a personal vendetta against Twilight, Starlight must find a way to protect her and protect his own heart. As the dark forces start to rise, will the young prince survive what lies in store?

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Comments ( 25 )

hehe, Stargate reference? or just coincidence?

1280864 Nah. Totally coincidence. I was about 33% awake when I wrote this chapter.

1280877 make the ring stone and you'll be making it awfully similar to Star-Gate: Atlantis TV series alright.

Man good to know that your still going on with these stories their great and awsome!:rainbowdetermined2:

1282370 Thanks for the support man! Next chapter today!:rainbowlaugh:

Totally swag :moustache::ajsmug: youve earned these

Love the story but to me it feels kinda rushed......so I think you should go at your own pace ok?:pinkiehappy:

1334323 Dang, I thought I fixed my problem of rushing. Thanks, I'll be pacing myself now. :rainbowlaugh:

You need to stop rushing, take your time and write it out. anyway, someone's gunna write this so it might as well be me MOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAARRRR!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

1629554 Eh. This isn't my best story.

CANCELLED!? :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: But I loved this story :fluttercry::applecry:

1635076 I'll come back to it. I just didn't want to leave people hanging while I'm trying to work on something else. Didn't mean to upset you.

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Oh thank god :derpytongue2: I feel much better now. PHEW. I thought you just gave up :rainbowlaugh:

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Technically, shouldn't it be put as "on hiatus" rather than "cancelled" if you are gonna be coming back to it at some point?

1831763 I'm 99% sure that I'm not coming back to it, thus I feel it would be best to mark it cancelled.

1832511 your not coming back to it? RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

2808634 When I looked back at this, I realized that I wouldn't be able to make it better. This whole series is rough, even the fourth book.

2808981 :pinkiegasp: Spike: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

2809668 Might I ask what you like about this series?

2810340 alicorn, nuff said

Hello everyone! I riffed this story for Doctor and Ditzy's Science Theater. Thank you twow443 for letting me do your story! Book 4 has been riffed as well. You can find the riff here:

Part 1- Part 2 - Part 3 -Part 4 -Part 5

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