After one great night Kyle's life changed forever when he came to a new world.
This is a very overused description but it fits. This is a romance will be coming in later chapters. And when ever we get into something more mature I will give a side note at the end of the chapter. And other then that I hope you enjoy.
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Pretty good first shot my friend, although there are spelling and grammar errors everywhere :P maybe do a lil bit of proofreading there man
1302631 Alright I may to a little bit more of that in for the next chapter and Thanks Man
ONE MORE THING!!
CAPITALIZE YOUR i's!!!!!!!!!!!
1303172 damit thought I got em all
WOO HOO!!!
good story so far bro, and yes there are errors EVERYWHERE!!!
1304562 I"ll try to minamize for the next chapter
I kind of see where this is going. but if this is about Applejack then at the least introduce her somewhere in the next chapter.
First btw
1310007 Hey first I know AJ needs to come in to the story and she will be entering in the near future, second thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy it and continue reading
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Okay dokay.
And yes i am liking the story so far
He has literally died and gone to heaven!
very nice bro, now if we could only get your spelling better
Yeah, like Flutter_Shy said, you gotta work on your spelling, and it feels like you're rushing it... but other than that, this is a good story.
1314883 Thanks bro, and I think I'm gonna have to start Em or someone edit from now on.
1314945 Thanks for the feed back, and I'll try to slow down a bit and Thanks for Reading
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I haven't read it yet though, but I will try and get around to it this weekend. Going to a movie tomorrow with Sam, and playing Borderlands 2 like mad with her. 
Set up the pre-reader/proofreader/thing password and send it out to all of us; we can help you dot your I's and cross your T's.
1316285 I don't know if I will probably text you in the upcoming days about it, I just don't know that much about it though
Can't say anything except wow.Hope you make a lot more chapters.
1318063 Thank You, and I will try my best to keep this story going
Can't wait for granny smiths reaction to him!
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She gonna go olde granny style and hit him with her cane or walker
1326498 Hope not it will probably kill him!
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haha probably
Happy you updated keep up the "good" work, i say "good" because im not the master of writing and im almost positve ther r ppl who wont agree w/ me.
1357995 First thanks for reading
But if you do like it THANK YOU SOOO MUCH! 
second I know I'm no master writer, I'm most likely the farthest thing from. But for those who don't like it all I got say is "If you've given an actual shot and read it all and still don't like it, then have a nice day"
1397332 Hey Thanks for reading
and I'm hoping to do a good portion or writting in the upcoming weeks unless family or work stuff come up 
Ololol, you and your Coronas.
1404905 yup never giving it up
Everything seems to be going to good for him. I have a feeling something bad is going to happen.
1476465 maybe
or maybe not 
*does not know how to feel about the meat being eaten*
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I agree but still a pretty good though
things are going to good for this guy. The universe is to much of a ass to let all this good happen without something bad happening.
Does granny smith know he was human?
1603559 Nopony knows that
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TOUCHE! hahaha !
god dammit... i read soo many stories that leave you in suspense because of cliff hangers... other than that im enjoying this story... good work...
also first
AWWWWW SHEEIT
RUN!
SHEEEEEEEEEEEIT NYUGGA RUUUUUUUUUUUUUN
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ya except this is gonna be a long cliffhanger cause he's moving and it will be a while before he can update.
Okie dokie lokie
Alrighty then!
Sounds good
then they died... again
hot damn, she thinks your cheating
I think the story is progressing a little too fast.