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Many years after Twilight ascended the throne, Trixie started to feel a sense of loneliness. Sure, she had her friends, her "fans", and her students, but this feeling was...different, somehow. This was something she had never expected to long for: a romantic relationship. Over the many years working at the school of friendship, only one mare made her feel this way. But she'd never be into her...right?
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I'm a simple man: I see a story involving Trixie being happy, I like.
Chapter 3 is now complete! Now I know I said Chapter 3 was the finale chapter...but I still have one more surprise left to share. Check back within a week for something special.
A bit fast for a first chapter. A few errors here and there, but still cute.
Reading on.
A quick read through for errors after posting helps correct a lot of small ones.
Let's see where this goes...
A sweet little fic. Just need to run through and correct some errors.
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I'm still new to story writing and thought it was cute. My first story is still on Hiatus at the moment and I thought this would be a nice change of pace. Maybe in the future I'll revamp it and spread out the confession/asking for a date lol. Hope you enjoyed regardless.
Do you have some pointers or examples of the errors? I thought I was pretty thorough in my double and triple check.
I did enjoy.
I don't know how to quote text so I'll just write them here for this chapter...
First there should be their.
powerful success!" giggled to herself.
Should have Trixie before giggled.
Hoofs should be hooves
Just some examples.
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Thank you. Those examples have been fixed and I've begun combing for other errors.
Well that certainly was... fast. First date out of nowhere into time skip into wedding.
Pacing would do well in a romance fic, I think.
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Again, I am a new writer. I know this story is extremely fast paced and a bit sloppy. I was just putting this story out there for people in any way I could. Plus, it says "years later", as in they had dozens of dates over the next few years, and Trixie is the one to propose. I didn't want to write out more dates. Just doing the one drained my creativity on the topic. If I had time and was super passionate about it I would add more and spread the pacing out, but I'm not. I honestly didn't want to write this fic in the first place. As it is I think it's a nice, if quick, romance fic. I hope you and the 300+ others enjoyed regardless. I thank you for the critiques.
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Yeah, I'm not dumping on you at all. I understand. Just voicing exactly what you said. I don't take up new stories too often and this was the first Trix/Twilight I've ever read. (I'm not a big fan of Trixie.)
As such, I would've really liked a lot more, but I understand short and sweet.
I still dropped a like.
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Of course. Thank you.