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Marble Pie is the shyest and youngest of the Pie sisters. With her sisters Maud and Pinkie gone off on their own, it leaves Marble with her parents and her other sister Limestone to tend to the rock farm. With so much work to do, Marble tends to get stressed a lot. One day while in the attic, Marble decides to vent her feelings and frustrations, not knowing someone (or rather something) was going to be there to "listen."
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This was a nice read. It's always nice to see Marble get some love, and it's always funny to see Boulder get the spotlight. Aside from a few mechanical issues here and there, this was a pretty solid story. Good job!
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Well thank you! I'm not sure I understand by mechanical issues? Is that like the way I represented Boulder "speaking", or was it something else? I'd like to hear your feedback.
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I just meant that I noticed some issues with things like grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc, but these weren't significant enough to be distracting.
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Okay. I usually do a proofreads on my stories but I always seem to miss something in the check. If I notice any of the errors I will fix them in the future. Thanks for the feedback.