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Saran_GodKingOfAlicorns


GodKing Of Equestria

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Comment posted by Saran_GodKingOfAlicorns deleted Aug 30th, 2023
Comment posted by Saran_GodKingOfAlicorns deleted Aug 30th, 2023

Man, I'm really glad you gave us an entire chapter of power levels. It's always such a pain when writers just tell the story instead of making me stop and do number things.

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This comment is so sarcastic that it loops around to being serious.

One of the finest comedies I've ever read. *chef's kiss*

Comment posted by Saran_GodKingOfAlicorns deleted Oct 2nd, 2023

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If I can give some constructive criticism, you don't need to start a new chapter every hundred words or so. It's not too big of a deal, but it's one of those "nice for the reader" things. If you want to cover multiple scenes in one chapter, a page break (or even just a doubled-up space between paragraphs) should be plenty. :)

unironically the best anon story i've ever read

Comment posted by Saran_GodKingOfAlicorns deleted Sep 7th, 2023

This is an artistic masterpiece

Comment posted by Saran_GodKingOfAlicorns deleted Oct 2nd, 2023

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You dedicated an entire chapter to three power levels

I really love this story, can't wait to see what happens.

in the short description of this story, your text is "Anon, having arrived in Equestria, fights Discord and crushes all ponies to be under his rule. " but in the main description once you click the page, Anon seems like a good character that will fight against an evil force, and i wonder wich of the 2 possible stories is it?

Cadance is based pick.

That is all.

Comment posted by RandomCommentor deleted Sep 12th, 2023
Comment posted by RandomCommentor deleted Sep 12th, 2023
Comment posted by RandomCommentor deleted Sep 12th, 2023

Why does this feel like ai wrote it The way jumps around going from one story point to the other, never getting into too much detail.

i love this story, another grate chapter.

Comment posted by Mkchief34 deleted Sep 24th, 2023
Comment posted by Saran_GodKingOfAlicorns deleted Sep 28th, 2023

I keep reading "Dark1" as "Darki" because I'm so used to 13375P34K. ^^"

The dislikes caught my attention. Setting this to read later. The comments are glorious as hell, if this is any indication I'll enjoy the story.

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