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Jamin P Rose
I write fetish clopfics and other things. Commissions: Not Open, working on existing commissions.
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Well that went differently than I thought. Big MT Innovative Toxin mist is supposed to strip organic matter entirely and corrode non-Saturnite metal. You need a Darklight chemical suit just to live and the metal filtration just leaves you to turn into a ghost person soup.
And why a zebra? Its clearly some kind of dog affected by a malevolent unseelie fae creature created by dissolving some changeling or other fae in the Innovative Toxin mist and retaining a mental pattern. Why stripes? Again, its some spellbound pseudo-fae druid used as an evil paladin to the unseelie creature. And there is an escape. Even godlike trope creatures are fallible. Little Anthony Freemont can't wish you into the cornfield if you act without thought. You can't dispatch the godling of course, but you can dispatch yourself. Which is almost as good. To insist on expiring outside the schedule of a tyrant is to win a victory. And no matter how pyrrhic, its like that Gaiman paraphrase of Chesterton. "Fairy tales are more than true. Not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten."
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1).This is not that mist, it is an entirely separate thing. It is completely unrelated to Big MT's mist and the Pink Cloud (Fallout Equestria).
2) The zebra, Heart's Desire, was given a gift by a spirit of nature (akin to the fae) as a boon for helping save their home. Most people call them were-timberwovles.
3). With zebradom porn the ponies getting domed usually get striped. In this case it serves as the prefect medium to affect change through magically enchanced ink and a brush designed to allow it's user to manipulate whatever's being painted.
Hum, the writing seems a bit more clunky then your usually stuff, like repeating the same name at the beginning of the sentence twice in a row a few times, and the more conventional wording. But still, I loved the the air of mystery of the place, even if a bit short, I do very much liked the premise and the male turn futa aspect with a zebra dom. Keep it up man.
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Yeah it was a bit clunkier than usual, though the commissioner was happy with it as is. There will be more of Heart's Desire coming at some point, but that one's not a commission and still in the works, so it'll probably take a while longer.
Still, I'm glad you enjoyed it, despite the clunkiness.
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You're welcome, I still very much liked the premise and the male to futa tf stuff in it.
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Explains a lot. Zebra stuff always seems to have a trajectory. I'm neutral to it, even if a mouse's tail gets stepped on. Just makes it hard to have zebra characters who are seen in a good light. The implication is always they'll turn evil. Because they always turn evil.
The malevolent spirit is fascinating. Almost what I assumed. A melted evil changeling in a mist to kill the mind of intelligent creatures. It's not a blood red cloud tasting of pennies but it wipes the slate clean all the same. With a therianthropic druid to act as an evil priest and tyrant Lord to scourge the world and, ironically, do what the paranoid ponies thought. Zebrafy the world into a subjugated state. You've got quite the war story here. This could really be something. And as the herd grows larger, the nonomniescient controllers lose the signal in noise, can't contain all the actors. Can't wish them into the cornfield. The size will stabilize at the limit of their concentration and control, which would also be interesting. Unbroken lovers of freedom who are aro-ace or just think higher than an orgasm, those are the stories that really loom large. As I said, you have a real corker on your hands.