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Necrogen Lord
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I really, REALLY think you meant "ministrations".
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I did write that, but it changed for some reason. I have no clue how that happened, shouldn't have said that, thanks for pointing that out.
Not bad, not bad! You handled the fetish really well, and I liked that you gave some good attention to their breasts — both of them — which gives some nice contrast between the two.
Only possible complaint is that the very end seemed pretty rushed. The last couple of paragraphs. Just a few more paragraphs with more description and then a short after-sex scene might have tied up the ending much nicer.
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I can add a little something when I have a moment, if you'd like.
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Don't worry -- I wouldn't impose!
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Please, it's your story, a gift meant for you specifically.