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DungeonMiner


Working on new stuff always, I'll be back before you know it.

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This story is a sequel to Celestia Goes West


Sunset needs a job, and Princess Twilight Sparkle has the perfect one. All she has to do is find a magical crystal in the middle of the frozen north and return without freezing solid or being crushed by strange golems under the command of a deranged mage caught up in the thrill of discovery.

And there's Flash to deal with too.

Chapters (24)
Comments ( 45 )

Hello Mr. Miner! Glad to see you 'round these parts again :D

There was silence on the other end for a moment. “Okay,” Flash eventually said. “Can I come with you?”

I swear if this man is still simping over Princess Twilight 💀

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LMAOO HE IS

bro it's been how many years??? dedication, i guess?

Where is pony Flash again?? Still in the Empire helping or Guard duty in Canterlot??

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Crystal Empire. Which is where Flash is heading next...

Ah, romance. The bane of all existences :derpytongue2:

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“As far as Ceremonial duties are concerned, that’s got to be super easy.” Sunset groaned. “Flash.”

Missing a line break, I think the term is

“I,” Sunset began, “I not in a good place to do this, Princess. My car just broke down, and I’ll have to pay for repairs, rent, and food. I need the job that I have to get this all taken care of.”

I'm

Yes!!!

So glad I decided to check back on the first book after like 2 years! ☺️

“Oh,” the pegasus said. “I’m Flash Sentry. Twilight and I, well, we’re good friends.”

It sounds to me like a future rivalry! :ajsmug:

Absolutely love how it’s starting to turn out! :heart:

Ngl, I ship Twilight with both… so I’m not 100% sure who to ship her with. However, Night has proven himself and he deserves love sooo- I guess I made up my decision!

“I know,” he said. “Complaining builds character.”

Quote to live by lmao

Hmmm, thing is, pretty sure Twilight would have mentioned the double factor on the other side of the mirror to the other Princesess and Sunset could have said as much to Cadence ... but on the other hoof ... :facehoof:

Oh dear, that's quite the yeet

“Clearing some funds, yes,” Starburst said before he pushed up his glasses. “Come this way. We’ll get you taken care of.”

Starburst

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You know, halfway writing this chapter, I had a feeling that something was wrong with that unicorn, but I couldn't figure out what.

Flash slew a golem... Huh. Neat.

I like this Flash. More please!

He rolled his eyes. “Look, Princess Twilight very obviously didn’t want me to stick around. She probably wasn’t expecting me to be here or something, but she didn’t want to deal with it, so I gave her an out.”
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This man. Just left his home for an alien world in the hopes of seeing his old flame. Probably lonely. Willing to risk life and limb just for a chance at happiness. And now he sees her. And she clearly doesn't want to see him. That's soul crushing. I've been there.

A life and death mission to save the world sounds like a good distraction.

Oh dear. Night is dealing with some complicated feelings. A creature of the night who has been in the daylight for too long. I really hope he and Twilight stick it out.

damn, that was impressive flash

Can you please make an equestria girls fanfic on Twi x Flash? Princess Twilight and Human Flash

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I'll be honest: I don't like Flash that much, and this is my attempt to do him justice. Maybe I'll do a fic like that in the future, but I don't have any plans for it.

Here we go, the big reveal of who's been up to the shenanaganry

Ah... That may be an issue

“You’ve got to pull yourself together, man.”

Maybe Night should take his own advice *cough cough*

Ardent grabbed the bat and smiled. “Let’s see who can make my night?”

I want him😋

Hmmmm, is Sunset having a 'Twilight at Camp Everfree' moment ???

Losing respect for Flash here, if anyone is being selfish in this situation it's him. He should be helping her build herself up, to help prove to herself that she's not as emotionally weak as she thinks, instead all be can do is think about himself and his own insecurities.

At least Sunset came out and aired what was on her mind.

Count me among the fans, though late to the party. :pinkiehappy:
Can’t wait for the next installment. And wow that’s a lot of emotional angst floating around. Really sucked me right in. :raritywink:

Didn’t know this sequel existed until just now. With how much I loved the last one I have high expectations for this.

Oh crap.

I was under the impression they were going to send a strike squad, not a whole platoon; and now that they've been spotted, the magic doohickey is going to formulate a plan beat them before they even reach the top of the mountain.

These golems are just gonna be the distraction to sideswipe them to under functioning capacity

No mention of leaving the human Flash Sentry to fight an army of murderous Golems with the Royal Guard? 😅

When he comes back with PTSD I hope they don't tell him to suck it up and be a man about it.

Your creativity to work within the spell system you've created never ceases to amaze me. (Also, I'm back :D)

“I’m sorry, Sunset. Don’t…I don’t want to drag up your past, especially since you’re working so hard. I don’t open up old wounds. Despite that, a part of me will never let me forget. I don’t know how to deal with that. My head knows you’re doing everything you can, but U have such a hard time separating the two anywhere else.”

you

Wonder who the person will be.

dammit, pov change! you cruel, cruel person

Well, that certainly wasn't what I expected (in a good way.)

Hmm. Definitely a different approach from the other two stories. Liking it so far.

Ouch, that is.. Damn.

Yikes, that's a lot of casualties for just one.

Yippee! (also all caught up now :D)

woop woop Badass Twilight and Sunset :twilightsmile:

Bad ass powerfull Twilight :twilightblush::rainbowlaugh:

great chapter

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