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"I'd like to be a tree."

"Which one?"

"..."

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Contest entry for the Arboreal Yearnings contest!

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Comments ( 7 )

"oh you like trees? Name every tree"

"Uh oh"

Was not expecting that twist! Great prattle and an amusing survey backed by a consistent interstitial (arboreal) meat of a tale. :pinkiecrazy:

Hello! I've been reading and reviewing all the treefics, so here's yours. My favourite part of this was the dialogue, and AJ's unexpected answer was fun. The ending comes a bit too much out of nowhere for my tastes, though. (Also, FWIW the spoiler marker didn't work with the EPUB version on my phone, so I didn't even realise it was supposed to be spoilered until checking on the website.)

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Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate it!!

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You're very welcome. Thank you for writing!

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