• Published 5th Jan 2023
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Human House in Equestria - Star Dawn



A human house appears in Equestria thousands of years before the start of the show.

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Dear Diary (Short)

Dear diary.

I have never actually written in a diary before, so forgive me if this doesn't really seem like one.

It has not even been a day since I have been into this new world, and everything is crazy.

Genders are reversed here, I am not an idiot to not catch the discreet glances to my butt in a way that males do to a woman. Also, Magic is apparently a thing now; at least here.


Honestly I am taking this whole thing in stride, so far it's been alright...well as alright as it gets when people can literally control the entire universe with ease. Or so they claim.

I fear for my future, I really do, but what can you do; If I get into trouble...that's future me's problems right?

Wish me luck, and if everything goes smoothly I might just survive my first day.

I hope.

Once again, wish me luck.

Elliot out.

Author's Note:

This is just something to let you know that I changed my mind, I decided not to be dead; instead I just decided to learn as I go. I hope you like this short chapter, and I will see you all next time.

Comments ( 12 )

If you keep doing a good job the fans might offer ideas on what they think should happen in the future. Good authors have fans that offer ideas on what might happen next and I can see you have talent. If you got any better then the fans couldn't even guess what might happen next and from what I seen that is rare.

Glad to see more here and keeping working on your stories. Can't wait for the next chapter, but I have too.

What is this a crossover of?

I am glad you are back your storys has amazing potential

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We understand, I do wish you the best on continuing the story.

Continuing a story, regardless of whether you think it is bad is a good idea. I suggest continuing and using it to learn and improve.

Please continue

Pretty good so far mate I'm looking forward to more!

This is actually really good please don’t abandon it .

Is there a new chapter coming out soon? It's been almost year since the last one. I like this story.

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