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ZawaYashi


Just a weird dude in a pony world.

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Comment posted by Mystic Sunrise deleted Oct 14th, 2022

Thanks for the update!

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No prob!
Thanks for enjoying it!
:yay:

Hopefully things go well in the future here.

Oh no you fools you jinxed yourse-

Oh hello… Murphy

Why is this on hiatus if your still updating this fanfic?

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Because I didn’t know when else I would add to it. I’m with my family right now for Thanksgiving so I had time to throw in a chapter. I’m usually busy with work and since I’m trying to draw pictures for the chapters it’s also going to take me a while. I just finished the last drawing for the 2nd chapter.

I'm starting reading now, and I already can say it looks promising. :)

But the Hiatus bother a little... :twilightoops:

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I’m at a convention currently! Hopefully I’ll add to it soon and I am making pictures for each chapter so that’s also being a bit of a hold up. Chapters will come soon though! :derpytongue2:

Comment posted by AmlpfanREADER deleted Jan 9th, 2023

Hmmm... Rushed development. Mary Sue twilight it seems. Why does she have to bring him to her friends, the job of taking care of people are social workers not a librarian.

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Not sure what you mean by librarian but Twilight brought ZJ with them to make him feel more welcome even around her friends mostly since she knows her friends might go overboard at times but will still be friendly and try to help.

This is first person story telling so the main character doesn’t really have the mind to go deep into thought with certain situations.

But don’t worry. Future chapters will go south and not seem like everyone, even the main character, is high and mighty.. or even a Mary Sue.

If you still think that why I wasn’t really aiming towards making a Mary Sue, or even an Anti-Sue which ZJ is not, just an adult that doesn’t really know what’s going on, which the world of My Little Pony is slowly seeping into their brain.

Thanks for the commentary though.

Ok that Drawing looks Amazing 👏

I love the BUCKING ART!!!
It makes the story more fun to read.

Is he able to Grab Stuff?
Or not?
Also will he say that he's adopted in a 2 legged Family while he's the only one who walks on fours?

Because he can lie and say that he was adopted.

How old is he though?
Like is Human Age Different from Pony Age?

Because in Equestria, 50 or 60 years old could be an legal adult age while being 20 is Teenager Sage.

Oh well, I guess I have to Find out when i continue to read this Fanfiction 😅

DUDE GO TO THE BUCKING HOSPITAL 🏥!!!!
You got a Cut ✂️ in your Mouth!!!

The Head is always the Most Bloodyies Places of all the body Parts.

Your basically drinking your own Blood or could Drown in it.

I hope he learns a Healing Spell if Mean Ponys are going after him.

I actually like the Idea 💡 of him not having a Cutie Mark for the rest of the Chapter in the Future, but it's not my Story it's yours to tell.

Is he going to place a Fake Tattoo on his Flank?
Or Is it a peace of paper 📃 and Their just gonna put Tape or Glue on it????

Ooh man, I think he just Jenkins himself 🤔
Not sure if I spelled that correctly.

.....
Uh???
Why did that Pony did a Cut Mark to him?

Like Buck Man, that Pony wasn't at the scene when it happened.

Damb!
I hope that Fake Cutie Mark will fade away 😔

Like DAMB in the beginning of the first Chapter the Enity said that he will do good things.

Nope not seeing that at all, his life is Garbage again.

Noooo....
I hope Discord or some other powerful Pony will Help get the Mark out of him.

Oh please tell me Discord actually helped him get rid of the Mark on his Flank!

I really enjoyed this. Hope things go better for ZJ.

Excited for when this ever gets back from hiatus.

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