"I'm sure that you have heard about the origins of Equestria at least once. But much probably what you know about it is not the truth due to the changes made during all these centuries. Because of this I'm now writing this book telling the story of how my sister and I became alicorns and changed history, bringing harmony back to our land."
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Author's Notes:
* This is my first fan-fiction submission. I have no idea what I'm doing
* Thanks to LulamoonSparkle who helped me correcting lots of grammar errors
Chapters (2)
First thing's first: Cover art. It makes a fic so much more inviting.
Second: Run this through ms word. All words underlined in red are incorrectly spelled and green means a grammar mistake.
Third: Capitalize words in the title. Makes it just look more professional and official.
Four: Fix the discription. It doesn't describe the story at all. It's just a mini prologue.
Five: Hope I helped.
Rating:
3 Pinkies out of 5.
Well, this looks pretty intriguing! I can't wait to see where you go with this! Thumbs up ^^