Oh boy. Writing stories just for me now?

Thank you so much for making this for me :D
Once again we await the tidal wave of support and hatred. Let us enjoy the chaos together!

Awesome work dude keep it up as always, love your work

Well, there go my plans for the evening.

Fun clop story. Only bummer are the self entitled horsedumpling heads that go along downvoting because they are homophobic.

I unironically hate how this entire series uses pics where the stallion is the sub, only for it to be the same human-sub shit as always
The world does not have enough human on stallion stuff in general and this deception, while completely illogical and existing solely within my own head, is completely devastating
Horse asses are meant to be fucked, damnit

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Even though i commissioned this story, i did not choose which art the writer would use. Think of it as a kind of plot twist. After all, you never know what craziness leech brews up until it lands on our doorstep.

Well, who wouldn’t want to bang Big Mac anyway? He’s a hunk!

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Ayo what do you mean by that?

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If it makes you feel better, I did just finish a human on stallion story where the human tops!

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That I'd be too busy reading this story to do whatever it was I had planned previously.

Which was nothing. I was just making a little joke.

There's absolutely not enough human on stallion content on here! Thank you for contributing!

As I was reading this, whenever I read stories I always have my music playlist on, and somehow Bob Dylan's Knockin' On Heaven's Door started playing almost as soon as it got to Big Mac knocking on the door. This was to perfect for me not to comment and reply to this story. Also this was a good story, nice work!

I normally don't say this but hollly BUCK THIS STORY NEEDS A THIRD CHAPTER OR A DOZEN AND A FEW SEQUELS

Amazing work, love reading romance done right like this.

Eh... The writing is competent (as usual), and Mac is certainly adorable. But Alex is such a plank of wood. It's really hard to be invested in his fate.

The romance is kickstarted by good old 'Damsel in distress' trope, and we barely see the two interact outside of sex scenes. Too little humanity, at least for my tastes.

Standing about a head taller than himself

My NOT Little Pony. I jest, I know we were warned ahead of time.

the excitement of having been rescued

Nothing gets Alex going like feeling weak and helpless, I guess?

Mac’s wounds needed tending to

You think?

“You want to be my coltfriend?”

Alex was polishing Mac's spear for a while, but a short talk about this was not an option? He couldn't ask if his pony wants to hit the town for a drink (i.e. go on a date)? Again, really hard to care for this character.

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characterization will be more fleshed out in the sequel fics, don't worry.

I thank you for your honest words however.