• Published 21st Jun 2022
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Poni Food - zargein

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Another good chapter. I've been waiting for another one.

Just a few typos and a word missing


Sigh is missing after relived

Flash hoisted Lexi into the air, then gulped her down. Her thighs went quickly before Flash placed a hoof on her feet and swallowed them tracing their outline as it decended into his stomach. He gave a relieved, and allowed Lexi to get comfortable before looking up at Ela. “You ready?”

A space is missing between "and" and "he"

“Yah I know it’s a lot, but let me tell you.” Flash knocked on his belly twice and it began wildly thrashing around. His tongue lolled out andhe slouched back in his seat with small distended points popping up on his gut from Ela wiggling around inside his stomach. “…It’s soooo worth it.”

I've got a wonder where are you gonna go From here

What are the odds of this continuing? Because I'm fascinated with this world.

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