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It's Not THAT Kind of Party.

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Phase88

Phase88 #1 · Jun 29th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Loved this story from beginning to end! The setup, the pacing, the characters, everything worked extremely well together! The only thing I would've done differently would be to extend the ending just a bit, allowing Rarity to have a little more time on top of Vinyl.

Definitely stealing this part for a future story

Vinyl rolled off of Rarity, tumbling onto the floor in a heap. "So," she asked,"...thoughts?"

Flora Blossom #2 · Jun 29th, 2022 · 2 · ·

For me I feel like this is good. I give it at least a 7/10. Well done you peak my interest!

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