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6 Months after the series finale was a hell of a time to start writing fanfics

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this is how you need to increase the number

I wrote something along these lines about Starlight Glimmer feeling guilty over all the bad stuff she did. Never finished the story for some reason... Maybe I should? Anyways, mine was more of a dark comedy, so a different approach.

I hope one of the later chapters as Dash being among those who use the pillory rather than the one in it.

Great and thanks fir non anthro story

What about for punishing ponies who are otherwise legally immune? Like Agent Sweetie Drops getting caught snooping through Mayor Mare's office during a mission?

Nice, but would Spike just use his wings to close the stock.
Also filthy rich and Applesck next chapter, can’t wait

Twilight smiled, trotting up in front of Rainbow Dash. This was why Twilight was so fond of the pillory; By the end of the day, it was barely a punishment at all.

From a AU narrative perspective that says so much about you and ponyville...

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She won't exactly be using it, but I have a chapter planned where Dash is, let's say, an "active spectator". :rainbowwild:

Back when Granny was a nubile young mare, she had constantly been getting herself thrown into the stocks on purpose so she could flirt with stallions passing by instead of keeping her head down and taking her punishment. Eventually, the stallions decided enough was enough - In front of Town Hall, the square, and everyone, a stallion had reared up and mounted her.

Every stallion nearby: "Finally!"

Rainbow Dash expected Spike to hop off of her back as he shimmied backward, but instead, he put one claw on either side of her waist. "You go on without me, Twilight," he said as he hopped partway down, still holding onto her hindquarters as he swung behind her.
"I'm going to take the first turn."

:twilightangry2:: "Spike!"
:moustache:: "Uhm... yes?"
:twilightsmile:: "I'm so proud of you, my boy! Carry on.

It had been a while since anypony was put in the pillory; Ponyville was a peaceful place. Dash blushed furiously, hating being put on the spot like this.

And here I though Rainbow would enjoy all kinds of "attention"...

Rainbow Dash opened her mouth to make a remark to Thunderlane right before he plunged his medial ring into her hole, along with the remaining length of his cock. Instead of a snide remark, the sound that escaped her mouth was a squeaky whine, so high pitched it was on the edge of hearing.

Plot twist:
The scream was so high it hit an Bat Pony frequenzy. The mating call of an horny Bat Pony mare, to be exactly.
And every Bat Pony stallion nearby had heard it...

That was her opening.
Dash spit the cum onto Smolder's face.

:twilightsmile:: "Guess who's punishment just got extended to the rest of the week?"
:rainbowderp:: "Uhm... not mine?"
:twilightsmile:: "Try again..."
:rainbowwild:: "Yes!"
:twilightsmile:: "I'm glad to see you start to see the error of your ways-"
:twilightoops:: "...wait, what?"

Damn... To make a Punishment into a reward... Neat. :rainbowdetermined2:

Catdick... Ouch... :rainbowderp:

Outside fertile times it perfect to get some steam off :rainbowkiss:

Stallion probably are very welcome during heat season :rainbowwild:

Filthy jack is always fun to see, so this chapter was a okay in my books

It was her own forebears that had started the tradition. But Applejack wasn't much of a slut, and wasn't especially looking forward to strangers and neighbors having their way with her

Granny Smith: "I'm sure I teached you better than this, child."

Pokey responded tiredly, "What? Oh-Oh, yeah. Sorry." He tried to pull his member back.
And he was stuck.

Pokey: "Well, it seems I have to stay here for a while. Poor me..."
Random stallion: "Indeed poor you. Since you're finished it is technically my turn now. But because you keep me from mounting AJ I'll have to mount you instead..."
Pokey: *gulp*

Going on into the day she had served pony after pony. Caramel, Hayseed, Dr. Hooves, Davenport -- there were ponies she had known well, and ones she had only ever talked to a hoof-full of times.
And they had all cum inside of her.

That's a good thing, right? (At least outside of heat season.)

"Big Mac, thank Celestia yer here," she groaned, "I'm at my limit. I expected gettin' used by strangers would be the worst part, but I reckon it's been more embarrasin' gettin' plowed by ponies I know."

:eeyup:: "In that case things will become very embarrassing now..."


Good chapter!
I enjoyed reading it.

About the ending:
Does it mean both of them will be in the stocks tomorrow?

Say, does the following theory of mine make any sense?
The stocks secretly have an (subtle) enchanted to make whoever is locked inside horny and needy while keeping them from thinking straight.


Found a missing word:

The only should she made

I believe the word "sound" is missing here.

I think we should see gilda in the stocks with spike and gabby giving her ass a good hard spanking

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Pokey: "Well, it seems I have to stay here for a while. Poor me..."

"Stay a while, and listen..."

"That's right!" Twilight announced as she unlocked the stocks and helped Applejack up onto her hooves, her hips aching from Big Mac's pounding. "Now get some rest. You have a big day tomorrow." Twilight looked over at Big Mac and winked before adding, "You both do."


YEEEEEEHAAAAAWW!!!

hope there's a part 2 of aj in the stocks

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Sadly, no such plans. Next in the stocks is Pinkie Pie, but I'm taking a break from this story to finish up a Starlight/Thorax - Trixie/Pharynx story.

I want to see Twilight end up in the pillory.

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Looks like Twilight never filed the paperwork to re-zone her house from a library to a castle. She's gonna have to pay for that. :twilightoops:

Just found and read this story, really nice work!

Please continue!

Looking forward for both AJ and Mac in the pillory :rainbowlaugh:

Nice little twist there. Did not really expect that it would take a while until Pinkie finally got some, despite trying to lure those passing by.:rainbowlaugh:

What a GLORIOUS chapter

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This Stallion is a maschine of pure stallion delight in matters of performance ♡

She had been in the stocks for a whole hour, and nobody was fucking her.

Plot twist:
Twilight and Mayor Mare realized ponies don't consider this punishment an actual punishment.
As such they decided to punish them by not punishing them.

Pinkie pie waited patiently for her next patron in the stocks. Of course, for Pinkie Pie, "patiently" meant she called out to literally everycreature that passed by like some kind of lewd carnival barker.

To be fair, no one expected anything else.

Is smolder and gallus even of age?

Applejack placed her head and forehooves in position, letting Twilight lock her in. "I understand, sugar-cube. I ain't one to worm out of payin' what's due." Applejack hadn't meant to cause trouble. She had just taken her eyes off her apple cart for a moment, and when she turned around it had rolled away, crashing into another market stall. Now she was being punished for destruction of private property. It was an innocent mistake, one than anypony could have made. Still, she had to pay for her carelessness if nothing else.

Wait, so you can get punished if you accidentally break the law?

This wasn't a stranger's cock. It wasn't some neighbor like Filthy rich. It was her brother, her beloved brother, the most special stallion in the world to her. She loved him. She wanted to please him. She wanted to make him cum.

Is that legal?

At the unexpected permission of his wife to face-fuck their employee, Carrot's member stiffened so quickly it slapped up against his belly, making a fleshy smacking sound. Pinkie grinned, as Cup Cake continued, "It's not like you've never thought about it before." Carrot opened his mouth to protest, but was cut off, "Don't try to object! I've seen you eying her once or twice around the store. Besides, this is a proud Ponyville tradition. It's your...um...civic duty?"

Sure it is.

Mudbriar took the compliment without changing his expression, simply responding with his usual blasé manner, "Hmm, yes. Well, I trust you'll be amenable to a session of vaginal intercourse? Although if not, the rules of the pillory dictate that I may avail myself of your services regardless. I would prefer--"

Well, that’s nice to know.

Lets face it... Twilight going for Alicorn stamina and will milk Big Mac all day long until her holes all are filled and her fur is glazed over with Stallion goodness... Its good to be Princess ♡

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> Implying there are not stallions in Ponyville bigger than Big Mac
> Implying I haven't already written part of a chapter involving Twilight and Rockhoof

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How can Rockhoof bone anything smaller than a grown Alicorn without killing it? :rainbowhuh:

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Through god, all things are possible.

Also, potions.

I really, really like this series. I'm assuming all of the M6 is gonna be in the pillory by the time this is over? Maybe some important side mares like Starlight or Trixie?
Either way, I'm looking forward to more of this series. I think it's really good. And you slipped an impreg tease in this Pinkie chapter? Yeah, I made the right decision liking, faving and bookmarking this fic. Looking forward to the next chapter :yay:

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I'll rip this band-aid off real quick; I have no plans for Fluttershy in the pillory, but already have stuff written for Rarity next, and Twilight as a finale.

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Damn, but hey, I really like this story so far. Even though my favorite girl won't be in it, that's fine. You keep keeping on fellow writer, I'm still looking forward to the next chapter. I do love me a bit of Rarity.
Hoping Spike has a return for her. I really really enjoyed my boi taking initiative on Rainbow at the start. He definitely doesn't have to, it's your story and you don't have to say whether he is or isn't. I'm just thinking out loud lol.

But anyway, I'm rambling. I really like this story so far! Keep up the good work!

Oh my god, this is terrible! Horrible! It’s the worst. Possible. Thing! :raritydespair:

Not the writing or the story, those are fine! Great, even!

No, what I’m referring to is the fact that somehow, this:

For a second it looked like he would be kept from giving Pinkie the full Mudbriar experience as his ring crashed into Pinkie's taut entrance.

is the most exciting part of the chapter. Someone didn’t spell it ‘taught’ for once. (Or worse, ‘taunt.’ :twilightangry2:)

I don’t even want to know what that says about me. (Probably that I’m just not as much in the mood as I thought I was. And, of course, I’ve been reading too much badly-written porn lately. :facehoof:)

Again, the chapter is fun. It even earned a thumbs-up. It’s just my entirely inappropriate reaction that’s terrible. And funny enough I thought it worth mentioning.

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> I have no plans for Fluttershy in the pillory

Call it fate, call it divine intervention, call it luck, but external factors have resulted in me writing a Fluttershy story.

Stay tuned~:yay:

Nice update. Story describtions need a small edit.

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True, thanks for the reminder!

Another day, another well used time at the pillory. Keep it up:twilightsmile:

Spike the endurance and glorious Crystal Empire hero, he earned his titel this day :moustache:

nice spike got a turn but he only used her mouth?

Didn’t know this would get a new chapter.

Nice to see an update, nicer to see it’s my favourite pairing. Great work

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