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SunsetShimmer222


Sunset is best girl 🌟

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16 year old Sunset Shimmer, a young duelist who wants to become the next duel monster champion. After having a strange dream a weird woman named Tempest appears and now the two have to work together to collect all 100 number cards.

(Yugioh Zexal x Equestria girls crossover)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 17 )

Are you accepting OCs into this story?

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I can if you want. I don't really have a problem with it.

Pretty good so far. But there's a few too many grammatical errors in here to simply ignore. Also, I don't know how I feel about Sunset being in Yuma's position. If anything, I think her and Rainbow should have switched roles.

Very interesting. Just out of curiosity, is this Sunset still pony from Equestria or completely human

I love Zexal a bunch.


Will Spike be a duelist too?

Well only thing I have to say is I hope this not going to be a plain character swap piece. Thou I feel like you should’ve change the “ feeling the flow” to something about heat or fire since sunset a bit of a hothead.

I like how you change bits and pieces of the source material by having sunset top of class she not dumb just scattered brain.

But I feel like the decks could be spice up a bit I see rainbow as a harpy type girl to be honest.

But I can’t wait to see how you improve from here.

Is ok for me to ask if there is any plans for Spike in store too?

11316661
Probably not I'm working on some things at the moment

11317324
Other stories and I'll be going back to school after next week

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In that case, a list of my OCs can be found here.

You live in Florida too? Cool


So this fic will continue for a while?

That nice this back but still feel like sunset more of an getting fire up girl other than that this is great can’t wait to see what happen next.

So will your story work with any of my OCs in it? Or have you not decided yet?

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