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wertyui


life is better lived "with" than "without"-my own quote

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shortly after the mane-iac was imprisoned in her own impressive mane, she was rehabilitated at the maretropolis mental asylum and hairstyling school, as a bonus, she got a new braided manestyle. she was returned to the city a changed mare with a new goal in life, to right her wrongs.

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Did capital letters and proper punctuation hurt you when you were a kid or something?

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Oh, sorry. I'll go back and fix that

Short, sweet, story.

It fits weirdly into my Head cannon, where Mane-iac's mind is fried from her transformation.

Although be aware that not everyone will appreciate your creative approach in getting around the word requirements.

And I say this as someone who hasn't started writing anything (in large part) because of them.

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Also, you are still missing certain punctuation and capitalization marks.

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Ok, I'll take another look. Thanks again

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