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Maniac92


Amateur writer, professional slacker.

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Mane-iac is having a bad day. She has no ideas, her previous ideas have all been failures, and her confidence in herself is shattered.

With nothing better to do, she goes to see her archenemies, the Power Ponies.

Cover art by SakuraWolfer.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 25 )

Heh.

A bit short and almost too simple, but cute.

I loved this!

Mane-iac groaned, her head flopping back into her arms. Her long green hair spilled over the desk she was sitting at. “I don’t know…” she muttered.

Is this supposed to be Human or Anthro?

Humdrum groaned, putting a hoof to his face. “Just follow me,” he said as he gestured for the other ponies to follow him.

What da what?!

5443358 It's not Human or Anthro. And I'm using the actual Power Ponies characters from Spike's comic as opposed to him and the Main 6. That's why Humdrum is a pony in this rather than a dragon.

I like it. Perhaps more could have been done to describe your characters thoughts and Mane-iac's walk through the city, contemplating various ludicrous schemes to get a better understanding of her depression. But it was good. So you get some stuff.

5443491 Yeah, actual ponies.

:rainbowlaugh: THAT WAS RIDICULOUS.
Twilight: Hey, I just inspired a completely insane super-villian to kill a bunch of orphans! I feel like an accomplished super-hero! :rainbowlaugh:

In their defense. What good are heroes with out villains? Without villains, you're just a costumed freak.

even villains need heroes.
like this.

"Let's hit that orphanage!"

I laughed way harder than I should have at that.

Hoo, this cracked me up!
Now to see what ELSE you can come up with!

YOUUUUUUU
IMMMMBECIIIIILES :rainbowlaugh:

GIVE THIS MAN MORE THUMBS
CHOP THEM OFF, AND SEND THEM TO HIM IN THE MAIL!
...
I think Mane-iac is rubbing off on me :applejackunsure:

5443393 You forgot that Zapp speaks in old-timey English (a la Thor), but other than that, this was great.

5446968 Darn it! I was going for more of a Static Shock feel.

:rainbowhuh:...WTFDIJR...:rainbowlaugh:

I would lice to make it known to everyone reading that the author has characterized me perm-fectly! WAAAA-ha-ha-hoooooo!

you, sir or ma'am, have now earned a follow.

5459587 As a sir or ma'am or both, I appreciate that follow.

A random part of me is wondering if Mane-iac has any other henchmen named "Steve."

5471833 Well, there's Steve, Steven, Stephan, Stefano, Even Stevens...

I AM LAUGHING SO HARD :rainbowlaugh:

That was nice, but I'm still waiting for a human turned maniac or human turned queen novo story, where they aren't witht heir typicall anon behavior or with the human turned maniac being Equestria suddenly instead of the comic.

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