its a good start but i need more until i can form an opinion on this ngl

This chapter really picks up from the previous one. If the story is about Moon Petal surviving and escaping enslavement, that's one heck of a story I'd like to read. Just...if you could add some more of that descriptive magic you have in your other stories, like Future Elements and Late Delivery, maybe it could be more impactful.

Konigi feels like he'll be an interesting villain. Idk if you plan on taking him as the sly and cunning type with a side of sadism or maybe something more bombastic like Calvin Candy from Django