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Fluttershy is a forest witch, and a little mishap with her familiar ends with truth serum in her pot of tea, just in time for Discord to join her for their usual Tuesday Tea. Of course neither of them know this, which leaves them both speaking in honest truths. Can they fix it before they say too much?

Written for Day Eight of Fluttercord Week. Prompt: Truth Serum.
P.S. I hope you like my title because somehow I cried laughing when I thought of it. Enjoy the pun.

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This is some good stuff right here

Great story! Everyone seemed perfectly in-character, and Fluttershy and Discord had some wonderful interactions in this. I love all the references and tropes that Discord himself eluded to, and the way they both slowly realized what had happened to their tea. Angel, you're in big trouble...

And their confession was very sweet, and felt very them. Heartfelt but not over the top, saying exactly what needed to be said. :heart:

“You’re a witch! Surely you have something in one of your books!” Discord knew there was a reference to be made there, but had to stop himself from breaking the fourth wall and focus on the problem at hand. (Besides it wasn't really a truth anyways, as she wasn't his wife. Not yet, anyways. The potion simply wouldn't allow it.)

"I'm not a witch, I'm your wife!" (The Princess Bride) — is this the reference you were eluding to here?

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"I'm not a witch, I'm your wife!" (The Princess Bride) — is this the reference you were eluding to here?

Yep. That's the one :twilightsmile:

Also, thank you, as always!

Very nice, very sweet. THumbs up.

This is a very creative story about a truth serum, I love it! :twilightsmile:

Did...

Did you just make me one of Discord's references?

There is no greater honor...!

Also, you gotta love some references that the rest of the world doesn't get except Discord. That always is a good way to go for him, and yours were entertaining.

Also, I really loved that the cure was a big confession! I thought that made it a little different, with the description of having a big bubble in your chest popping.

Good job!

“You’re right, I wouldn’t,.” Her eyes widened, “But you asked and I found I had to be honest.”

Yes the classic truth serum

“The cure,” She squeaked, despite wanting to say it was nothing. “Apparently, the cure is a confession.”

How convenient lol

That was a pretty cute story and of course Angel has to be a jerk about it and despite his anger and everything he accidentally knocked down one of the potions into Fluttershy's tea which he was pretty worried about this so basically he went away to avoid the problem but then Discord showed up and Fluttershy offer him the tea and they both drink at and things got really interesting when they started to speak the truth about some stuff and they start to realize something went wrong and Fluttershy tried to figure out what's wrong with it and apparently it was one of the potion that Twilight was asking a true serum so they just have to find a way to get by this but unfortunately Fluttershy knew the truth that the only way to cure this is the honest truth and it will send you free and despite their awkwardness they told each other the truth about how they felt with each other and despite all that they realize that they finally let it all out and they will relieve how much they do truly care for each other and they really want this to work out again this was a pretty nice story and something tells me angel is going to be in so much trouble but anyway keep up the good work

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