Hoi! I have no idea what I'm doing!
A short story inspired by this image I saw on DeviantArt.
I saw it and was like... YEP! Storytime!
This is a short story and sloppy written so take what you can get.
The image I was inspired by and cover credit: https://www.deviantart.com/orin331/art/He-s-back-903731809
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Yes!!!! Finally someone is as excited for G5 Sombra as I am!!!
let hope if he does comes back he be a actual threat
This sounds off to me. Did you mean "fine"?
Morality. Mortality is the concept that you eventually die.
Finally a bit of lame nitpicking, just in case it might help you with a more serious story:
Here Brave implies she has no idea.
Moments later she's an expert. It doesn't really make much sense.
Otherwise pretty amusing story, I gave it an upvote. The swearing honestly felt a bit forced, but I understand you put it in due to the meme. Perhaps you could add a few extra SoL chapters as Sombra repeatedly gets culture shocked as he experiences the new world and perhaps eventually gives up on the prospects of world domination because living life with Brave is simply more fun. But that's on you, really.
“In case I need to perform a siege” is a very good bit of characterization
heres a thought if sombra does indeed return could flurry heart return as well i mean for one we would find out the truth on how magic was lost and the three tribes started hating each other but flurry who knew twilight sparkle and the rest of the mane 6 could be a mentor figure like how celestia was to twilight
Hasbro's marketing crew are monkeys. I'm not believing that toy description until I actually see Sombra in the show.
Alondro shows up behind Sombra, "So did I."
And THEN they were TRULY F'd!
11119720 They're pulling a Star Wars memberberries thing here. It's gonna be just as shoehorned as tossing Palpi back into the final movie... I wouldn't be shocked if Sombra shouted out, "UNLIMITED CRYSTAL SSSSSLAVESSSS!!" while shooting lightning into the sky. Lol
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Welp I’m just happy to have Sombra back!!
Yes bitch! I lived! And without any princesses, Equestria shall be mine!
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--Actually?
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Yeah!! I mean, look at my username :)
This is actually a very good story idea.
Id like to see a continuation.
That was a entertaining short story, great work.