• Published 27th Nov 2021
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Frozen Heart - Reviewfilly



After a team of pegasi return cursed with frost that cannot be thawed, Sunny and her friends must confront a far older threat that looms in the frozen North.

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Epilogue

"Your Majesty,

The Equestrian Union would like to officially open its border towards Your domain as discussed previously. We would like to begin preparations for the cleanup of the city whenever it is convenient to You, so that we may proceed to the stage of allowing immigration into Your empire as soon as possible.

As mentioned in our previous letter, work has already began to reopen the EU-Crystal Empire train line. The new tracks are being laid down as we speak and I recently received news that the new railway carts are almost finished. We hope to soon connect Your empire to our grid, so that we can communicate even faster and speed up our work.

The Equestrian Union would also like to appoint Sunny Starscout as its official ambassador to Your empire as, - at the time of first meeting with You, - she technically did not possess this title. We do believe this is a preferred move by both parties and we look forward to facilitating an even friendlier relation with You.

Finally, allow me to speak candidly to Your Majesty. We cannot thank You enough for Your sacrifice. Sunny wasn’t willing to tell me the entire story, for which I do not blame her, however, based on the little she did tell me, I feel like it is not just simply our moral duty, but an obligation to remember why we can still be here today. She mentioned an ancient celebration, she read about in her journal. One that has something to do with the Sun and the Moon, I'm sure You should be the one telling me about it. We were hoping to reinstate this old practice to further our cultural unity and with You being a direct descendant of the royal line, it would be our great honor if You could personally open the celebration.

With our greatest thanks and respect,
Clean Conscience, President of the UPGAP"

Comments ( 4 )

11064368
So typical of me! I thought I'd add a few edits after I've asked /fimfic/ to proofread my story and of course I immediately leave a mistake in it.
Thanks for pointing it out!

11064380
That would have made sense as well, but I was more interested in exploring this character.
Thanks for adding my story to your list. I hope you enjoyed it.

Let's give this story some heat... Because it's a bit frozen!

Nice story, didn't expect that twist!

sequel? This feels incomplete or barring that as the intro to a much larger story.

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