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PegPony
I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.
PegPony
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great job on story
11045155
Thanks! :)
A fun story. I just wish the last chapter was a little bit longer and showed Twilight slinging it to Night Light.
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I did consider writing a part with Twilight fucking her dad but decided against it because the story was written with the idea that Twilight wanted her dad to fuck her. Would you like me to write a bonus chapter where Twilight ends up fucking her dad?
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how bout round 2 with vajaja and daddy knocks up twiggy =D
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If by that you mean "How about a bonus chapter where Twilight has a vagina and gets impregnated by her father", then I suppose I could do that.
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.................YES! something along the lines of they take a short break to recharge and in the mean time twiggys spell wears off and unbeknownst to her the temporary gender swap spell eliminated her birth control pills effects......
oh lol already wrote! XD this can work too i guess XD! awesome
nice work
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Thanks! :)
Honestly, this could use a lot of reworking, it's too short, and too low in detail at some parts by my standards...but, other than that, for what this story is trying to do, it does quite well. Another bit of honesty, PegPony, blunt as what I said before is, this story amazes and impresses me, because those issues actually aren't too bad in light of the fact that what time you took with this story actually is used properly, which warms my heart personally since it demonstrates my standard of "good" for a work of fiction. It can either be practically flawless, or do enough of what it needs to correctly that any wrongs or lacking parts aren't as important. This is the latter. It isn't perfect, but it doesn't need to be, unlike some stories that are nearly or outright unreadable to me.
There's at least one story series on a different site that I absolutely loathe because it has little detail, almost nonexistent characterization for the characters in it (this story does not have that problem in the slightest, thank goodness), and barely acknowledges any of what is going on it (also something this story does much better on), yet is a whole set of stories that basically say a whole lot of nothing for the most part, whereas this story in contrast has some things missing, but uses what it has like a good story should in my eyes. Massive relief reading this, and the idea is very fun (and inspiring, futa incest without the futa being the one doing the penetrating, or at least not to start with. Love it, definitely should consider doing something like that myself)
Definitely belongs in one of my good folders, and I hope Undeadman enjoyed even more than I did, and the same to others who put a like on this
Apologies if my initial criticism was hard to read, or wasn't said in the best way, but that's my off the cuff feelings about this story, both the bad and the good. Also, sorry about the mostly unrelated rant in here about that other set of stories, but I needed to vent my feelings. It's just such a waste of data that I just can't let it go...and also I'm working on something related to it, so it kinda has to be on my mind.
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Thank you very much! I love that you think this story is a story that can be enjoyed and your criticism was extremely fair, my vocabulary is insufficient in describing how much I appreciate everything you said. Thank you :)
11055511
Oh good, I do try to be nice, but I have some cynicism in me too. Also, at times, even when I've said much much less than this, I've gotten annoyance and sneering from people, so it's left me unsure what to expect when I really get honest like this.
I hope you have a marvelous day/night!!!
Nice story, it's great but where is the story book of Rainbow dash doing it with her father on video tory book? I've been curious about that. If twilight found the video of Dash and her father doing it, how come you haven't made the storybook about it with Rainbow Dash and Bow Hothoof?
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Interesting question! Are you officially requesting that I write a prequel that tells the story of how Rainbow Dash got with her dad?
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pretty Good right?
Like you did with other story book of Twilight with 2 chapters.
Something like that, yes. I'm also curious about it too, would you rather make it into a 6 or 8 chapters in the story of them when Dash as a filly (Dash and Hothoof first time doing it without Windy knowing it Ever! And away at work alot) and next as a teenager through those chapters and a grown up through the chapters of the prequel story. What do you think?
Also yes I am requesting it.
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OK, I'll add it to my list :)
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Thanks a lot. I'll be waiting for it soon.