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I love this series, would you like to borrow any OCs?

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Well it will depend on multiple things but we can discuss it in the PMs.

This is pretty good so far hoping for another chapter :eeyup:

YESSS!!!

FINALLY!!!
A actual story that involves kipo!!!!

It's displaced..but still!!!

Someone has finaly made one!!!!

YESS!!!

really Wana see where this goes now

Great story so far I look forward to future updates.
All the best.

Good work so far I can't wait to see take the store keep them to go to work

Whoever pissed off Fluttershy is going to die

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I am suddenly very afraid due to someone making Fluttershy go Flutterbat.

Also (grabs loaded shotgun):

20 bits says that Spoiled hired someone to take Kipo.

Excellent work can’t wait for your next chapter

“Hello, my name is Twilight Sparkle, personal student of Princess Celestia, and this is Barb, my assistant.” Twilight said, introducing herself and the dragon next to her. “May we come in?”

Slight mistake, earlier you named the dragon as Spike and male but from this point on they are she and Barb

When is the next chapter? I absolutely love this fic!

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Soon, I am just going over some things first. Spelling errors, grammar mistakes, basic editing stuff

Excellent work can’t wait for more

More good more now

Great chapter and story

Sorry but the crossover is to soon.

It is really nice to see the baby having fun and a friend but What hppened to her memmories?

What is Kipo's max beast form height?

I understand fluttershy stuttering against Spoiled but I do not understand her stutters around her friends or Kipo.

The murder granny info came too soon.

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Lies I know you kan wait!

It's not often you get a evil granny but this is well written.

Can't wait for more so good

.....why did I wait so long to read this!!!!

This is bucking awesome so far!!

I’d love to see the story you linked, BUT IT’S PRIVATED/BEHIND A PASSWORD WALL.

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Well, like I said in the Author's Note, Deltorix hasn't published it and I simply added the link because I am forgetful and may forget to add it when he does publish it.

Miss Scratch, you did a big no no.

“Ah, you mean to get their attention. For a second there I thought you had some special howl that you use to calm them down or something.” Rainbow Dash said.

He's not Link.

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