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PhilosipherKing
Born in a Empire of Intrigue, Emperor Orondion VIII, better known as the Philosopher King, seeks to turn his state to a Empire of Enlightenment.
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What the... I just... I... whaaaaaat!?
How do you go from fighting to having sex?
0-100 that escalated quickly!
I think it’s playing on the old trick or if sometime is it in the wrestling are competing against each over constantly it causes sexual tension That’s why there’s always so much sex going on in the army and a lot of military couples are cheating on each other all the time you’re always working and you’re around individuals are in the best condition of there life
Don’t they usually say god in eqg?
That’s usually in every teenage boy’s head.
Why?
That’s not 100% true.
I’m sorry, what?
So basically boxing?
I don’t think anyone has blocked so far in the story.
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Well, at least he got a reward.
That is creepy as fuck.
Aren’t his neighbors gonna see this?
I don’t know if that’s hilarious or disappointing.
Why would they be jealous?
10886039
Really?
I'll probably read this later but I was wanting to read a 2nd person fic and this is third person. Can you remove the second person tag?
Remove the second person tag, this is third person chief
Damn, first pinkie pie and now fluttershy. How is he gonna live this down?
interesting fic, but one minor nitpick is the oc's fighting skills seems inconsistent to me. I mean he was able to hold his own against Rainbow and Applejack, yet he didn't seem that strong against Pinkie and Fluttershy. Sure you could justified it by saying Pinkie got lucky with a few good hits and he underestimated Fluttershy, but those aren't quite enough for me. If he is able to win against Applejack by outlasting her, I doubt most of the other girls would stand a chance against him. I understand if you wanted to write a powerful female fantasy fic and there's nothing wrong with that, but the faulty inconsistent way you wrote your oc's fighting skills kind of ruins it for me.
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With Rainbow Dash as his girlfriend? Probably Never.
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able to hold his own against applejack, but gets knocked out by Pinkie and forced to tap out by Fluttershy.
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Rainbow: You lost to fluttershy.
Alex: And I was able to hold my own against you for a while, so what does that say about you?
Rainbow: Yeah, well...
10889678
Lol 😂 that’s funny I never thought about it that way.
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10889673
He better hope wallflower blush has that memory stone, because I can’t see him living this down any other way.
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Now I wanna see rainbow dash vs fluttershy.
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So, you don't really think much about the fights and who should win, you just write them and the winner is decided by whatever ends up happening, correct?
10889687
Sadly, I don't think anyone has made one. The closest I can think of was the fic https://www.fimfiction.net/story/351129/always-the-quiet-ones and the match was a joke at the very end, which we didn't even see and could only infer what was happening with three lines of dialogue.
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Essentially
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That explains it. I still stand by my first comment and don't agree with that way of doing it, but to each their own. At least he did get one win so far, against Applejack of all people. I wonder how she would react to the fact Fluttershy managed to beat the guy she couldn't. Though to be fair you can't exactly compare her match with the others so far, since wrestling is completely different than a straight up fight.
10889698
Interesting.
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I would not let him live that down. Now, if fluttershy were to pull a Hinata and hit all his pressure points, then that would be understandable.
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Before today's update I was actually worried Fluttershy would somehow knock him out in one hit. Who knows how the rest of the fights will go, since the writer admits he doesn't really think about who should logically win.
10889923
So he basically flips a coin to see who wins?
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Not really. From what I could gather from his reply, he just writes out a random fight scene and whatever happens, well happens. Even if it doesn't really make sense compared to other fights, ie lasting an hour against rainbow or 30 minutes against Applejack, but getting knocked out by Pinkie pie. Heck I remember the Rainbow chapter noting that he has endurance and can take a hit, yet that was forgotten during the Pinkie pie chapter. That's the main problem I have with this fic, though I can let it slide, since it seems to be a silly fun one.
10889931
That actually makes a lot of sense.
While I like that you used a joke I made, I am a little unsettled at how you showed their relationship as abusive. If you intended it as a joke, I don't find it funny and it's just plain wrong. If one little jab is enough for Rainbow to hit him than they shouldn't be together. I'm not telling you how you should write, but this is just too unsettling. At least have Rainbow called out and learn to work on her behavior. At least he won against Rarity, with the most fun way to boot.
I’ll be honest, I was expecting rarity to judo throw him.
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Well, he’s known rainbow dash for years so he should’ve known what he was getting into. Maybe it’s just another fetish he has?
10903441
It doesn't and shouldn't excuse it though. I'm sure it's not your intention, but it really seems like you are victim blaming.
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I'm just happy he got another win. Now he just has to win the next two to have more wins than losses, no pressure. He might win against Twilight, but i'm not so sure about Sunset.
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It’s ok, I can see why you think that because you can only read the comment. I didn’t know there was a victim to begin with.
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If he loses to sunset, then it’s time to either drop out or transfer.
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I meant it seemed like you were blaming him for the abuse, when the blame should be on Rainbow. I will be frank that kind of ruined this story for me. I will continue reading it since it's almost done. At least it most likely is. There is probably just chapters for Twilight and Sunset and maybe an epilogue.
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If he can live after losing to Fluttershy than I'm sure he can survive losing to anyone else.
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Yeah Sunset will be last and it’s going to be one hell of a brawl
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one hit ko? Never mind saw you edited your comment lol. Also sorry if I sounded ungrateful that you added a joke I made into this. I am happy and grateful you did. I just found Rainbow's response incredibly unsettling, but I can try to look pass it.
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Honestly, I wouldn’t be surprised if he masterbated after she gave him the black eye.
10903471
He should’ve already skipped town after that.
10903472
Really?
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oh god I did not need that mental image lmao.
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You didn’t think he would?
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It would have saved him from potentially getting dominated by the rest of the girls and avoid dealing with his prone to violence girlfriend, but on the other hand he would have missed out on his victory on Rarity, which is his best one yet.
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I don't think about what other guys tend to jack off to. Geez that's just... I can't even describe it.
Are you going to do a sequel to this, just with the Dazzlings and/or the Shadowbolts?
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Probably because rarity didn’t put up much of a fight.
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I wouldn’t say it’s something you need to think about.