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Heroic412227


Hi, my name is Heroic412227, but you can call me Heroic. I'm still learning how to be the best writer I can be.

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This story is a sequel to Dimension Tension


Due to how cold his home is during the holidays, Sid decides to create a device that will heat up his entire lair. But after it ends up backfiring, he enlists the Mane Six for help in stopping it before it could destroy the land.

Can the Mane Six and Sid stop it before it's too late?

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Comments ( 24 )

Wait, who is Sid?

Hello there! I think this story was a lot of fun! You did a great job on it. While I would’ve preferred the Tartarus ending due to personal tastes, the ending you went with was ultimately a perfect one and it’s in line with the show’s themes, so that’s always a plus. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading your future stories.:rainbowdetermined2:

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Thanks. What else do you like about it and why would you prefer the Tartarus punishment instead?

11106537
I don’t know. I guess it just comes down to personal tastes. I think it would’ve added a dark humor aspect for me, and I’m a sucker for that sort of thing. I really love the ending you ultimately went with anyways, so it’s not a big deal at all. I think the ending you went with ultimately fits better for the story itself, so I’m not mad that the Tartarus punishment wasn’t in there. Far from it. As for other things I liked, I liked Sid, I liked his motivations, and that sort of thing. I loved the Mane Six’s roles and stuff. Overall, a very fun Hearth’s Warming Eve story that I’ll definitely read again. Nice work!

11106549
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment posted by Heroic412227 deleted Jan 3rd, 2022

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No problem. I hope you’ll check out my stories too if you have the time. I only have 2 up so far and I’m multitasking between both of them. One is a Star Wars/MLP crossover story called Star Wars: The Trials of the Force (Part One), the first in a planned trilogy, and the other is a darker, longer retelling of the series’ pilot called Guardians of Harmony: A ‘Friendship is Magic’ Retelling, which will kickstart my interconnected universe of stories. I hope you enjoy them and feel free to leave some feedback as well on them if you can. Thanks!

Good story :rainbowdetermined2:

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Thanks. What do you like about it?

I'm confused. What is his punishment, exactly? It doesn't seem like one to me.

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Well, I originally wanted him to be thrown in Tartarus, but due to complaints about how extreme my punishments can be towards my characters, I've decided to change it into something lighter.

11114604
Ok, but what was the punishment, exactly? You didn't answer on what it's supposed to be. Is it them giving him a slap on the wrist and simply helping them heat up? That's all it seems like, which is fine by me, even though some might argue it's too far in the opposite direction when it comes to punishments,

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Oh. Well, after they're done heating him up, they might give him an actual punishment like community service again.

1111473
You still haven't explained what the punishment is. Please answer that. That's all I want answered.

11114781
No, the one at the end of the fic. Not your new one after the fact.

11114790
Oh. Initially giving them a slap on the wrist and helping them heat up.

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At this point I feel you are trolling me instead of failing to understand what I mean. If you don't want to actually answer me just say so, instead of dodging the question. I'll try one last time. Could you describe what the punishment at the end of the fic, not the community service and please tell me what it is specifically. I don't know how to possibly be any clearer than that.

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Sorry. I'll try to be more specific. The punishment for him is just letting both him and his minions enjoy their newfound heat after many years or months of living in a cold and chilling area. I know this might not help and I'm sorry for upsetting you if it didn't. I'm not trolling you at all. I was just confused on what you meant.

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Yeah, thought so. No, this actually helped since you finally answered what I wanted to know. I'm not really upset by the way, just a little annoyed that I had to repeat my question four times and even rephrased it twice, just to be clearer, when it was a very simple one. To be frank and I don't mean to insult your intelligence, but I don't get how you could not understand what I meant from again a simple question.

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It's okay. I'm usually not very good at being specific or understanding very simple questions at times.

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