Review: A hearth's warming Mess

Tags: Adventure, Comedy, Sci-fi, Alternate Universe

Summary: An object that could blow up Equestria.

Review: The fiction is nice and all but adventure is way too short.  For the comedy it is kinda funny in some ways… Sci-fi is there but it wasn’t handled very well. As this is an alternate universe I can see this happening in theory.

All I can say is that it's very short to be an adventure… but the rest of the tags seem ok.  The fiction does have it’s greatness but it also has a few flaws… the grammar has improved a lot… but still there are a few things… punctuation is all that is left now. (punctuation errors.)

I have to say this fiction is clearly a 7/10 for me. At the least.

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