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TheBronyKnight


I write about the things that people may find unimportant, but to me they are the right questions that need attempted answers. paypal.me/funkMonster

Comments ( 10 )

If the man that bang her leaves her because of not wanting to take care of a baby she absolutely deserves a punishment

This needs some proofreading or editing. There are missing words and simple grammar mistakes all over the place.

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I have lost my touch from the lack of writing in 3 months. It has been stressful on my execution, but still it's no excuse for subpar quality.

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Take your time. You just have to take it slow, give it some more thought. Make something that people can love your story even more than the attention of your previous stories are getting. Hope this helps.


Oh, I'm MASTERMIND360, I'm new in this site.

Oh? NTR? Here? Well that's a first I've seen here. Kudo points. But try running it by an editor if you can, otherwise great job.

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Definitely gonna take my time, but I do write the subject matter that comes to mind.

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I have made another one in training to master the sub-genre I wanna make here. I love Netorare-even if the stories are flawed. It needs a smarter story. The plot is always the same (I need to fix that with my theory and storyline subject as well when I regain my writer chops).

I'm maybe late to comment, but this is one of many reasons why lust don't give a damn about love.

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Sometimes yes, but they are more complicated and intertwined then one may think. Even love and hate are close siblings.

But not in the case of this story. Most NTR is about lust and the primal release of build up that a "steady" couple can't release because there is something missing.

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