• Published 8th Dec 2020
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Spike´s Apology - Starlight Fan



Starlight won´t talk to Spike for some reason and keeps glaring at him, he doesn´t know why. so he decides to ask Twilight what he did wrong.

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I´m sorry

Spike woke up and headed to the bathroom to take a shower and brush his teeth before heading out to the map table, and making it to breakfast and saw a plate of pancakes and was excited. He saw Starlight and decided to greet her.

“Oh hey Starlight, good morning.” Spike cheerfully said.

Starlight rolled her eyes at the dragon before replying “Good morning Spike.” in a less enthusiastic tone.

Spike noticed how unhappy Starlight was, and was a bit concerned.

“Starlight, is everything okay? You seem upset.¨”Spike asked in a soft tone.

“I’m fine, don´t worry about it, Spike.” Starlight said exasperated.

So now he acknowledges my feelings, he hasn´t even acknowledged my existence until Sludge left. Starlight angrily thought.

“But you seem upset, and I just wanna see if you´re okay and if I can-“ Spike said frantically before he was cut off by Starlight slamming her hooves on the table.

“Spike I said I´m fine, just drop it already!” Starlight yelled angrily while glaring at the small dragon.

Spike widened his eyes in shock, Starlight never got this mad at him before. Annoyed, well maybe, but defintely not mad, when Starlight saw the look in his face her glare softened she felt guilty for how she acted.

“I´m sorry Spike, I was just tired and I took it out on you, but that´s not an excuse for how I acted, I appreciate your concern but I´m fine.” Starlight apologized.

“Oh okay, by the way where´s Twilight?” Spike asked in an awkward tone.

“She finished early because she had to go back to the school to do some paperwork for the school. Why do you ask?” Starlight said in hesitation.

“I was just curious, that´s all.” Spike nervously answered.

“Oh, well I just finished my breakfast, so I´m gonna go study some magic in my room.” Starlight said awkwardly.

Starlight put her empty plate in the sink, and then left the room, Spike sighed in misery Starlight seems to be annoyed with him, and it seems like she didn´t wanna talk to him, come to think about it she´s hardly talked to him at all ever since Sludge left two days ago, she distanced herself from him and sometimes refused to make eye contact with him, once he put the pieces together, he realized he probably did something to upset her.

Oh no, did I do something to hurt her feelings I didn´t mean to do that, she´s one of my friends and I hate to see her suffer. Maybe Twilight will know what to do. I´ll wait till she gets back and then ask her what I should do, ugh but that will probably take a while, gah why is this so difficult? Spike thought to himself.

Twilight just got back from the school, and was worn out, she loves her school but it’s a bit of a hassle, she opened the castle doors and saw Spike pacing.

“Uh, hey Spike, something wrong?” Twilight asked in concern.

“Oh, hi Twilight, I’m glad to see you, I do have something I’m concerned about.” Spike nervously said.

“Don’t worry Spike I can help also, I won’t get mad at you if that’s why you’re worried.” Twilight reassures.

“Okay, here it goes. Do you think Starlight is upset with me? It feels like she wants to avoid me at all costs.” Spike asked.

Twilight’s eyes widened at this, she knew the answer to that, Starlight told Twilight what happened to her when Sludge was around and Starlight wasn’t very happy with him or Spike for that matter, it’s best Twilight tells Spike what happened, Starlight does need to confront Spike about this eventually.

“I hate to say it but yes she is.” Twilight answered with remorse.

“What? Did I do something wrong?” Spike questioned with worry.

“It’s actually more about what you didn’t do. You saw Sludge throw the bath tub while she was in it, but you did nothing, she seemed kinda embarrassed about the whole ordeal.” Twilight answered.

“Oh that, I forgot she was in that, besides she has magic, so I figured she was gonna be fine so I thought it wouldn’t be a big deal when she came back, she’d still be alive plus she didn’t confront me about it so I thought she wasn’t upset.” Spike replied.

“Spike, she didn’t confront you because yes she wasn’t mad at you since she was more mad at Sludge, and she didn’t wanna make a big deal out of it, she’s still hurt about it since you let it happen, but she just won’t show it. Besides I’m sure if that happened to you, you’d probably be upset too.” Twilight stated.

Spike realized what Twilight was saying and now he felt bad.

“Ugh, I’m such an idiot, not only did I act like a jerk to you, I let Sludge take advantage of my friends. What’s wrong with me?” Spike cried.

“Spike, nothing is wrong with you, you just made a mistake, I’m sure Starlight will forgive you if you apologize to her.” Twilight comforted.

“You’re right Twilight, thank you.” Spike said gratefully.

“No problem, Spike.” Twilight replied.



Meanwhile Starlight was in her room, laying down on her bed sighing, she may have been a bit too harsh on Spike, but she was seriously upset with him, to anypony else it was probably petty, but to her it hurt her a lot. She remembered how Sludge threw her off the window while she was in a bath tub, Spike was there too, but he just stood there staring blankly, he saw Sludge throw the tub, there was no denying it, but he did nothing to try and stop Sludge. Now she wasn’t too upset with him, but she can’t help but feel a little hurt by his actions. While she was thinking she heard knocking.

Please be Twilight, please be Twilight. Starlight thought.

Starlight opened the door to see a nervous Spike.

“Oh hey Spike.” Starlight said with hesitation.

“Starlight you don’t need to pretend to be happy, I know why you’re mad at me.” Spike explained.

“Me mad at you, why would I be mad?” Starlight asked with fear.

“Because I saw you get thrown out of the castle window and did nothing to stop it.” Spike answered.

“I suppose you’re going to make some excuses for what happened, whatever I’m all ears.” Starlight bitterly assumed.

“No, I came to say I’m sorry, I should’ve helped you or stopped Sludge but I acted like an idiot. I had no idea that hurt you so much.” Spike apologized.

Starlight’s gaze softened and she was a bit remorseful for how she was acting.

“You can come in, I’d rather sit down when we’re talking.” Starlight invited.

Spike came in the room and he and Starlight both sat on the bed.

“Well Spike I have to say yes you did hurt me a bit, you saw what was happening yet stood there as if you didn’t care about me getting hurt.” Starlight explained.

“Well I do care Starlight, I think of you as one of my best friends and I didn’t mean to make you feel that way.” Spike said.

“Spike I also should apologize, I’ve been avoiding you a lot, and I never once tried to talk to you about how I felt so I’m sorry for that.” Starlight apologized.

“It’s okay Starlight, I get why you got mad at me. So no hard feelings?” Spike said in a soft voice while smiling.

“No hard feelings.” Starlight answered with a smile.

Starlight and Spike then embraced each other.

Outside the room it was revealed Twilight was listening in to the conversation.

“Awwwww.” Twilight cooed.

“Well great job Twilight, you did it again, Yes.” Twilight congratulated herself.

Author's Note:

Before you get the wrong idea, no I am not mad at Spike for the whole bathtub thing, I know that was mostly just a joke and I don´t hold it against him regardless since he was being manipulated, but I figured this was a fun idea to try so I decided to write this one-shot. I actually adore the idea of Spike or Starlight apologizing to the other because those stories hardly exist and I love Forgiveness stories so a story idea was born, also I know Starlight is probably making a big deal out of this whole thing, but to be fair she was thrown out of a castle window while in a bath tub while one of her friend saw it happen but did nothing, I don´t think I´d be happy either, plus I did have Starlight forgive Spike in the end so that’s good right. I hope you enjoyed this one-shot.

Comments ( 36 )

Spike came in the room and he and Starlight both sat on the bed.

(No I’m not going that far)

I don’t think that people will get that idea unless you had put “laid” instead of “sat”

Comment posted by Starlight Fan deleted Jul 28th, 2022

I know I'm being SUPERpicky but you're not using the correct character for the apostrophe/single quote.

Instead, you're using the acute accent, and while they seem similar, any spell checker will mark the word wrong.

I´m (incorrect)
I'm (correct)

The accents are usually on the second and third row of the keyboard.
The apostrophe/single quote is in the top or bottom row of the keyboard.

“Well great job Twilight, you did it again, Yes.” Twilight congratulated herself.

The true hero of the story :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted Dec 8th, 2020

Spike noticed how unhappy Starlight was, and was a bit concerned.

¨Starlight, is everything okay? You seem upset.¨ Spike asked in a soft tone.

I gotta give respect to spike, usually when someone is upset at me, I either don’t notice or wait until they approach me.

(No I’m not going that far)

What does he mean by that?

10570573
I meant I wasn’t going to make a story based on them having s*x yet.

10570577
Oh, that didn’t even pop into my head. Also, yet?

Comment posted by Starlight Fan deleted Jul 28th, 2022

10570584
Oh, interesting

great story i sort of got mad about starlight being thrown out of the castle while in a bath tub (it's why i think season 8 to me was a sign of torching her) but until the season finale came that's when i got upset and it drew the line for me wish the 8th season went a different way than what was done.

10570678
Now that I think about it, whenever Starlight had a major role in a Season 8 episode it felt like a full on Starlight torture porn as she continuously suffered all the time. Don’t believe me, well let’s look at Parent Map, Matter Of Principals, Road To Friendship(Trixie also suffers unfortunately) and School Raze she always gets portrayed in the wrong or is suffering due to another character doing it to her, although I could be wrong. I respect your opinion if you disagree.

10570683
i really agree with what you said that's one of the big reasons why season 8 is my least favorite season (it always will) i did think season 9 was some what better (some episodes i liked and others not so much) my favorite episode from the season was the ending of the end (just thought it was an improvement over the the season 8 finale) before that my actual favorite episode at first was student council cause i thought it was going to treat starlight right (than came a horse shoe in and it's just about really bad treating starlight bad again) i really wish they treated her right in the last two seasons (especially 8).

10570742
I feel they only mistreated her just to satisfy the Starlight haters who enjoy her suffering(Although the Starlight haters are very respectful). I could be wrong though. No offense to any of the Starlight haters I respect your opinion regardless.(Yeah I kinda was harsh sorry I did not mean to insult any of the Starlight haters)

Yeah I remember that episode I thought it was funny but I guess some people don't take it too well when it comes to that and trust me I hated that character so much and I can't believe he got away with that as well and I understand Starlight gets upset with Spike I mean I would too but acting like that doesn't really help that situation as well but I'm kind of glad they both talked about this and apologize to each other okay look this episode was pretty ups and downs for me and sometimes I feel like the show keeps forgetting about this whole forgiveness sometimes so good job in the story

I really doubt Starlight would be so vindictive. She's forgiven worse before that episode.

10571204
Maybe, but did you like the story.

10571204
True, but she almost fell from a very high area, and if she wasn’t a unicorn she would have gotten injured, plus even though Starlight is forgiving(and I love her for it) she’s not the type to just let ponies push her around so she would probably be a bit mad don’t you think? I can see why you’d think otherwise though.

10571812
But Spike wasn't the one who did that to her. So I fail to see why she would hold a grudge against him for that.

10571902
He saw it happen but did nothing. I said I wasn’t mad at Spike but I found this story a fun idea and yes I see why you’d disagree with me on Starlight holding a grudge.

10571931
What could he have done, exactly?

10571961
Maybe he could’ve said “Wait somepony’s in there” or something. Look I don’t hold it against Spike, I just did this for fun. Sorry if I’m being rude by the way, I’m in a bad mood.

10572087
I actually went back to some clips of the episode, and I had to actually look to even notice her being thrown out the window.

Also, what’s got you in a bad mood?

10572588
Eh I got yelled at earlier, but I’m good now.

Look the lizard made Twilight cry wings or no wings that twerp is getting punted over the Canterhorn

10580756
I’m guessing you hated Spike this episode, I don’t blame you he was an absolute jerk that episode. I do have some sympathy for him since he was being manipulated.

10580756
Damn, I wish some people felt the same way about angel.

Nice little fic good one shot

10734985
Lol you responded fast

Bro I remember this episode and I did remember when Starlight got thrown out and that tub I thought that was kind of funny man but I guess she took it badly and she was a little mad at Spike I don't blame her to be honest with you and the way how Spike just said that the Twilight was pretty bad too good thing he apologized to Twilight and starlight but geez that was brutal

10571204
I agree. I can imagine her being peeved that someone threw her out the window in a bathtub, but not at Spike.

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