• Published 1st Nov 2020
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Benighted - Dormio



A draconic knight braves a land of Eternal Night for his fair maiden but finds a greater purpose.

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"Then we should report in with Empress Moon. She and Dapifer Nightshade may be able to make sense of this." The Commander grunted as he unsteadily got to his cloven hooves. "She and Dapifer Nightshade may be able to make sense of this."

You said this twice?

"Clock is ticking... The Sun will return... Equestria endures..." The Alicorn muttered to herself. "There is much work to be done..."

Damnit Twilight! I hope this isn't inspired from that other horror story I read long ago, with a over obsession with Twilight and stupid clocks. :facehoof:


P.S. and I'm finally glad that Dark Spike got that nice boobjob from Fluttershy/Flutterbat. Hope, there's more where that came from her and the others.

Very surprised Dark Spike is willing to share with Big Mac and the Commander Knight!?

Is this a once a year update?

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One or two chapters a year around Halloween/All Hallow's Eve.

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Missed the repeat. Thanks for pointing it out.

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And the other things I said? What do you think?

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Just a reference to 'Twilight Theory', the April Fool's event from 'Equestria at War' which is, in turn, a reference to the funni clock man from 'The New Order'. Narratively, it doubles as a call back to 'Lesson Zero' as to Twilight's mental state without her friends or Spike.

As for Spike sharing Fluttershy, recall in chapter 'Once Bitten', the thestrals call dibs on 'Shy with the caveate that they won't make her exclusive. In 'Super Freaks' by the time Spike meets 'Shy, he has gone through the Everfree horde mode, had his pelvis crushed by Applejack and hasn't had any proper food or sleep for some time. If he was at 100%, he might have been more possessive. Plus, given Flutterbat's new personality, it would be more accurate to say Spike is part of her harem alongside Big Mac and Knight.

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Just a reference to 'Twilight Theory', the April Fool's event from 'Equestria at War' which is, in turn, a reference to the funni clock man from 'The New Order'. Narratively, it doubles as a call back to 'Lesson Zero' as to Twilight's mental state without her friends or Spike.

Yes, that's exactly what I was talking about. I never do get the meme/reference to the "Funny Clock Man" from that MOI4 Mod: New Order? Can you please explain it to me again?

Is it like one of those game timer mechanics with a inevitable story event?

In 'Super Freaks' by the time Spike meets 'Shy, he has gone through the Everfree horde mode, had his pelvis crushed by Applejack and hasn't had any proper food or sleep for some time.

He didn't get his 'pelvis crushed", he seems fine after he took care of Timberwolf Applejack. I did re-read it right about now to check.

Plus, given Flutterbat's new personality, it would be more accurate to say Spike is part of her harem alongside Big Mac and Knight.

Damn! Never thought of it that way? Still, are they going to do it again? 😏

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Otherwise really good, would love to see more Boobjobing. Don’t let Fluttershy one up everyone else. Rarity and the others should feel jealous.

So REALLY VERY want Twilight to end failing spectacularly.

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