Dormio
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Will give this one a shot, hopeful Canterlot does better the empire.
Joy, and our King arrives a prince? Ironic to the extreme...
I'll never understand the point of a Hell. It's the most petty concept I've ever heard. "Bad people get bad shit done to them forever" and with that comes the baggage. How does one define bad? How does one justify torturing anything forever for any kind of crime/crimes?
Meh that's besides the point.
You're doing rather well with this. Not all that many mistakes although there are a fair few. I'd suggest just editing what you have here and the first part before you do anything else. Makes it easier for people to get into it.
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Some call it justice, others karma. I'm making Tartarus a mix of Classical Mythology and Dante's Hell since we don't really know what it's like in the show. The most we know is it's a prison, guarded by Cerberus, and has at least three mountain tops with portals.
As for who or what defines right and wrong, that's not for me to say. The Lord of Shades might in a later chapter, though.
When you say mistakes, do you mean grammar or content? I try to nail the technical stuff but going from Word to Fimfic's layout, I tend to miss a few things.
Anyway, I thank you for your feedback and comments on both my stories. Helps a lot.
Love this guy, the character is badass while not being op as hell.
Man i cant really express how much i enjoyed the story and the one before it.
Read everything up to now in one go and now i'm anticipating the next chapter.
I absolutely love how all the different things you took from other stuff fit together especially all the 40k bits. World building at its best in my opinion!
Honestly, I could see Princess Cadence leaving the country with any Crystal ponies who where not in the empire when it went boom. And the ending here is why I think Grey is not much better then some of the other villains.
6912765 Going to agree with you on that and given Luna's response's and thought's she isnt much higher on the morality pole than Grey and alot less stable . Overall i think Grey fits the Noble Demon Archetype quit well.
wow it sounds like he might have a heart however small it is....
lol's abound in this chapter...
The ship! Its sailing away! Besides that great chapter, just a few grammar mistakes. (No example cause too much work for a phone)
It returns!
how have more people not seen this amazing story
Please, for the love of god, do not stop, this saga is simply too good!
You continue to amaze me, though I suppose the story is complete or close to it, is it not? Regardless, excellent writing and it's been a pleasure reading, I hope for more in the future.
I want to see the overworlders expressions when they learned all that has happened.
What an ending to such an amazing story, bravo, you deserve all the attention possible for this series.
We love you and grovel before you for more my master.
I need more!
Is it wrong that I'm rooting for Tirek, here?
Fantastic story, 10/10 would read again.
P.S I ship It
AWWWWWW SHIT SON!!!!!!
Lel, though I suppose it's true. There is no True Immortality.
I can't believe it took me this long to realise this story is based of Greek myths and gods, with grey being Hades.
Originaly I would have thought the god king of the underwold would be better in a fight, but is seams his power comes from necromancy and not pure might.
Grogar is a mood honestly.