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Shouldn't you spoil that out, then?
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Crud.
But I warned that there would be massive spoilers at the beginning.
not a bad start
Kind of info dumpy, and when celestia just out right said he can't go back to his home, when he didn't even ask yet, but other than that, it's a good start!
Best of wishes! :)
Looking good so far you should let him be a father figure for Spike
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BY ARCEUS'S HOLY NAME!
Why didn't I think of that.
I'm really liking the story so far keep going strong. The only thing I can say needs improvment is describtion for the enviorment, it helps with world building.
Please for love of the Supreme Deity! Give me more!
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k
I was planning on doing a nightmare night chapter, but I may need to skip it.
This story is get better and better every chapter I read.
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Thank you.
I was actually a little self-conscious about this chapter
This was a great chapter, bit dissapointing it was so short but at least this means that the story is still alive. I am really liking the romance between Celestia and Mael and I can't wait for the rest of Equestrias reaction to Mael.
Noice.
great man but the lemon could use a bit more work
Not too bad chapter when Nightmare Moon gets hits by the rainbow blast she gets turned into a filly she thinks that Mael Is her father
I'm excited new chapter can't wait to see what's next
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If I ever decide to do interlude chapters, I may do that. It is a pretty funny concept.
Woooo, I'm so excited.
Sun boy gets Celly
Dead boy gets Wonna
I agree.
Hmmm fairly interesting story so far. Hope to see more soon!
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Thanks, I hope I can finish the next chapter before the end of next week.
I love this so much! I really wanna see more interactions between Ludociel and Luna.
Please Nightmare Moon pop out as a small foal please
OMG I loved this chapter!
Makes me wanna forget it and read it again!
I pronounce it as ma-hel or mah-el
I wonder if there will ever be a demon Slayer fanfiction?
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It is on my anime watch list, So if I like it I may write one.
No promises though.
This is really good. I love Seven Deadly Sins!
Celestia could be her mommy
How sinful
This story you made is amazing I hope that you return to it, and make even more chapters. Plus having Mael’s brother show up like you did is rather funny it makes me wonder if anyone else from their world will end up showing up plus Luna needs some loving as well.