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Hydreigon_Omega


I'm a universe hopping, goofy, pony loving dragon.

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This story is a sequel to My little angel


The holy war is cut short by an 'arranged' marriage between Elizabeth and Meliodas. And as part of the agreement of the arranged marriage, both the four archangels and the Ten Commandments are forced to take a vacation, to put it simply.

Having decided on where he would be going, he returns to Equestria. A place untouched by war for an exceedingly long time, and one where he gets to see his adoptive mom, Princess Celestia, once more. When the four archangels arrive at equestria, Sariel and Tarmiel learn something about their friend they never would have guessed.

But even with his great return, not everyone was as happy to see him as his mother was.


Tags and other things will be updated as needed.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 34 )

Yes! I'm so excited for this! :raritystarry:
Really intresting take on an alternate universe for this story. A happy timeline were no one died, at least amongs the Goddesses and Demons.

Can't wait for next chapter this is great!

Pic looks like something out of Deathklok.

Are we going to see a Mael/Chrysalis ship ?

Can't wait for next chapter

As time passed, the young fillies and colts had to be sent home because they had school tomorrow. After all of the little ones were sent home, Applejack brought out the adult ciders. Mael remembered how he had always wanted to try one, but his mother wouldnโ€™t let him, and probably for a good reason. So he managed to convince the other Archangels to try some with him.

Foals is the general term for a child equin, colt is the male term.

Celestia noticed Mael was starting to wake up and began to look around. Applying a hoof to the temples of his head, a pink glow emitted from his hoof, which was more than likely some sort of healing spell. Silently, Mael got up from the table and walked out the door. While Celestia didn't want to be overbearing, her motherly instincts told her something was wrong, so she followed him outside. By the time she got there, Mael was sitting on the side of the road watching the sun set.

There are some parts that are missing words, as well as some grammar errors. I would also like it if you could add a description for what Sariel and Tarmiel look like.

Other than that, I'm glad to see a continuation of this and I can't wait for Mael and Chrysalis to be reunited again. Sorry if I'm being picky, but I really like this fic. :fluttercry:

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I didn't see all those mistakes I made, thank you for pointing them out. Lesson learned: Don't proof read when half awake.

As for the descriptions of Sariel and Tarmiel, I don't want to use the same coloration I used for Mael and Ludociel. (Converting their skin color to a slightly different color for their fur) While I already have an idea of what I Sariel would look like, I am having trouble finding a good color for Tarmiel's coat.

p.s. I managed to add their descriptions into the chapter.

Yes sequel can'wait for next chapters

Update ???

Good luck Mael, your gonna need it where your going.

Finally new chapter and is good๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

YES!!!!
YEEAH!!!!!
:pinkiehappy:

NOOOO!!!
THE SHIP!!!!:fluttercry:

Aaaahhhhh how cute love it :raritystarry::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Cute! :rainbowkiss:
Can't wait to see more! :raritystarry:

It is going to find to see how "mother" and big brother would react to Chrysalis

will we see how blueblood prince reacts to his new cousin?
will we see mael show his invunnerability or other abilities as a powerful archangel ??????

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Yes for the first question.
The second one might be a no, but I do have something similar planned.

11140729
ok thanks for the reply ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

an interesting arrangement indeed, also why are the ten elite demons called the Ten Commandments

11140729
I absolutely love this so far! I'll ask this once and not bug you again about it and wait patiently. When is next chapter :scootangel:

11173214
it should be out some time soon, I am still polishing it up.

11173228
thank you and take your time:pinkiesmile:

Nice chapter as always, can't wait for more of this story. :twilightsmile:

But even with his great return, not everyone was as happy to see him as his mother was.

Then, those "people/ponies" are highly STUPID!

Yes continue ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

glad to see the story continuing, keep up the good work

11173228
Any news about an update? If not, fair, if so, you donโ€™t need to say.

All I actually ask is simple.

Stay safe, have fun, and remember to smile.:pinkiehappy:

Glad chryssi still remembers him! Canโ€™t wait to see more of this and where we go with mael and chryssi.

Great story so far, can't wait for more.

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