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LoverOfVillains
Just a dude who loves villains a LOT
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I NEVER really understood the show? I mean sure, he is one of the "greatest" fighters, and possibly a "super human". But, he is NO bulletproof or anything?
He got NO super powers, NO KI, Magic, or Chakra, or any anime/manga supernatural powers. Heck, I doubt he can stop a missile strike, much less a nuke dropping on his ass. Or survive radiation or severe incurable cancer, and he can't breath underwater or space. And finally, he AIN'T no OP Kaiju/giant monster like Godzilla that needs to be banished to another dimension/reality.
I mean, he isn't powerful enough to bust a continent/country. Much less a entire city or town.
I just think that the government and military in this anime/manga got no balls, and are a bunch of panties!
It's more the fact that they're too scared to do anything
Finally a Yujiro Hanma story.
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I think you may need to look at his feats more because he is definitely super human. Although I do get that the show can be a bit weird(I havent seen it all myself but I have seen a lot of videos talking about it which is how I got all of this KNOWLEDGE on it).
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Then they are unworthy to be in the military, if they don't got no backbone/spine, and titanium balls.
have
Y-you won't be dissapointed sir.
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Thanks! I didnt notice the mistakes because I type too fast lol. I'll fix em right away.
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can't
wondering when
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shouldn't, also did they see the corspe? Because they didn't really give a reaction to it.
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senses and the "though" and "she" is unnecessary.
began to shake it or started shaking it
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Faltered is more often used to describe sound, for example: "The music faltered before speeding up again." Stumbled would have fit better here.
On another note, you seem to have trouble when to add a comma to a sentence. Many lines feel dragged out with no pause in them, that's what comma's are for.
For example:
The lack of comma can cause confusion in what is actuelly said in a sentence. The pause helps with absorbing the information.
Sorry for being picky, I just want to help.
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Nah it's okay! In fact im glad to have someone correct the grammar because I sure as hell can't write shit lol. Thanks for the help!
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I wrote it like they already knew because of the roars of pain and the enraged Ursa Major. I can see why it would be a bit confusing to understand though so I might add an explanation later on today when im feeling a bit more like myself(I have a cold rn so my brain is sorta a bit sloppy)
Who is Yujiro Hanma, and what is so bad about him?
Hey guys! I know its been a while but I wanted to give a quick update and also reasoning as to why its on hold and when it might come back.
As of last week and half of this week I have been really sick and have found out that my sister has corona. Because of that I wasn't able to focus much on the story. However I will be making a return to it soon along with maybe starting work on another story so be sure to keep an eye out for that!
Anyways that is all. Again im sorry for keeping ya'll waiting but I think the next chapter and the story that I am thinking of making will (hopefully) be worth the wait!
Have a wonderful day and remember to keep an eye out for the next chapter!
I find this highly entertaining the three chapters I have read cannot wait to see more. Humanity's strongest creature versus magical ponies.
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do you not watch or read baki
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yujiro is the epitome of violence it said it to be in his presence is to feel every Instinct saying to flee
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Yeah that’s untrue Hanmas are bulletproof and can stop missiles heck Yujiros father stood on an tiny rock of an island and without moving took on an entire bombardment from the entire us navy without a scratch and then proceeded to defeat said fleet. Yujiro has many impressive feats such as stopping a high level earthquake simply by punching the ground and not being harmed by being struck by lightning as well as being able to dodge lightning strikes.
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Okay, I do admit that he is super human. But you said a bombardment with regular missiles from World War II era U.S. ships. What about actual nukes/atomic bombs and missiles!?
I also said that I doubt the Hanmas can breathe underwater or space, or survive radiation or severe incurable cancer.
And what about the Elements of Harmony or the Rainbow Power that took down a full-powered Tirek.
How is Yujiro going to deal with that as well?
Because despite being a top-tier superhuman.
He got NO super powers, NO KI, Magic, or Chakra, or any anime/manga supernatural powers.
And he ain't no Saiyan, Viltrumite, or Kryptonian that are easily Moon/Planet-Busters from their "normal" states.
And will never reach a Sun/Star, and Solar System Buster.