• Published 22nd Aug 2020
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The Eternal Nightmare - Twilight Star



Since Twilight helped Luna in Nightmare Night, Luna has started to develop feelings of love for the unicorn, and she wants to confess what she feels. But first, she must eliminate anypony that is close to Twilight.

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A Party for Twilight and Luna

Luna slept peacefully in her bed, with the blanket covered up to her neck. On her face, she had a smile because of the dream she was having.

In the dream, she and Twilight were already together like marefriends, and they were taking a night walk, with the stars shining in the sky like diamonds, and the full moon illuminating the road they were walking on. They soon stopped on a mountain, where they could see the small town of Ponyville from afar, but their intention was not to see the city, but to see the stars.

“Thank you for bringing me here, Luna. This is simply the best place, taking the balcony off the library to watch the stars,” said Twilight from the dream.

“You’re welcome, love,” said Luna.

Twilight from the dream looked at Luna, now with a pink flush on her cheek. “Love? What an interesting nickname.”

Luna looked sadly at Twilight. “Didn’t you like the nickname? I can stop if you want.”

Dream Twilight calmly shook her head as she said, “No, no. It’s okay, Luna, seriously. I liked the nickname, I’m just shy when it comes to nicknames.”

Luna soon smiled at the answer. “I’m glad you like it, I would hate to make you feel uncomfortable.”

“Imagine, Luna. Your company would never make me feel uncomfortable,“ Twilight said with a smile, ”and it’s not because of a nickname that will make me feel that way.”

Luna smiled at the words and hugged Twilight with a wing, which resulted in Twilight blushing. “Thank you, Twilight. You have no idea how good your company makes me feel happy.”

“I think you said that to me once,” said Twilight from the dream, not taking the smile off her face.

Luna laughed lightly at her marefriend’s response. “Yes I recall. But what harm does it remind you of that? After all, since my first Nightmare Night, we have become friends, and now, we are dating.”

Twilight’s dream couldn’t help but agree with Luna, she would never have imagined that she would be dating the Princess of Night, but deep down, she was happy.

Luna, still smiling, put a hoof on Twilight’s chin and made her and Twilight from the dream look at each other. Twilight of the dream couldn’t help but blush when she saw Luna’s loving smile. Luna slowly brought her head closer to Twilight’s until her and Twilight’s lips touched, which took Twilight by surprise too. The princess began to kiss the unicorn’s lips sweetly. Twilight relaxed and closed her eyes, returning the kiss.

Luna opened her eyes slowly, and yawned as she stretched from the bed. This dream she had was beautiful, mainly due to the fact that in the dream they were marefriends. But she knew that this dream was going to come true, because now she had a book in which she could help her confess. Now, it was a matter of days before she confessed and had Twilight for her.

She went to the bedroom door and opened it, left the room and closed the door with turquoise magic with the intention of having breakfast. She needed to confess that she was excited to practice confession in front of the mirror. The only thing she hoped for was that when she went to confess to Twilight, the purple unicorn would agree to date her.

The dark blue alicorn opened the dining room door with her turquoise magic and entered. Celestia, as usual, was already at the table, eating her pancake. She sat next to her sister and started eating at a fast pace so she could go to her room to practice the confession in the mirror.

Celestia seems to have noticed the way Luna ate, and that surprised her. “Luna, you don’t have to eat that fast.”

Luna looked at Celestia, swallowed the piece of pancake and said, “I’m sorry, sister, but it’s just that I’m looking forward to training my confession in front of the mirror.”

Celestia immediately smiled and said, “Ah! So are you going to start training your confession?”

Luna nodded in agreement. “Yes, sister, I am excited and anxious at the same time.”

“To train your confession?” Celestia tried to guess.

“That, and when I go to confess to her,” Luna replied. Celestia raised an eyebrow in confusion.

“Are you going to confess to her tonight?” She asked.

“I don’t know, but the probability is no, because I would be staying at the castle tonight to train my confession,” Luna replied. “I want the confession to be good enough for Twilight to accept me as a marefirend.”

“It’s okay, Luna. Take as long as you can,” said Celestia, before returning to eat her pancake. Luna let out a slight sigh and a small smile soon appeared on her, and went back to eating too.


Twilight and Spike left the library together with smiles, but went to different places: Spike intended to meet the Cutie Mark Crusaders at the treehouse and Twilight was going to see her friends at the Sugarcube Corner. The unicorn started thinking about what she could talk to her friends about. Maybe she could talk what happened recently, like Luna coming to visit her at night, for example.

To distract herself, she watched the ponies of the city, there were many ponies walking the streets; some were alone, others were accompanied by a foal or a grown pony, some were going to see friends, others were going to shops and others were going to work. Twilight needed to confess that today it had a lot of ponies up in the morning, but she was not going to judge the reason for that, since possibly they had important things to do today.

She then saw the Sugarcube Corner in front of her and went in, looking for her friends. There were plenty of tables with ponies in the store. Some ponies were just eating and others were talking while eating. She soon saw her friends sitting talking, at the table there was a plate of cupcakes. She trotted over to them with a smile and sat down on the left side of Rarity and the right side of Fluttershy.

The five mares soon looked at Twilight when they saw her. Each smiled in a different way: Applejack smiled friendly, Rainbow smiled proudly, Fluttershy smiled shyly, Pinkie smiled happily and Rarity smiled fabulously.

“Hi, girls!” Twilight greeted them.

“Hi, Twilight!” The four mares greeted Twilight back.

“So, sugarcube, anything new these past few days?” asked Applejack.

“Yes, Applejack,” Twilight replied.

“What’s new? What’s new?” asked Pinkie, all excited.

“So, girls, do you remember when I said that Luna kept me company during the night after Nightmare Night?”

“Of course we remember, dear. Why?” asked Rarity.

“So, Luna has been visiting me quite often during the night,” Twilight replied. Pinkie let out a big breath on that.

“Has Princess Luna been visiting you all this time during the night? Did she become friends with you?” asked the pink mare. Twilight agreed with the answer.

“Yes, since the end of Nightmare Night. Why, Pinkie?” asked Twilight, now confused as to why Pinkie asked that.

“Because it deserves a party to celebrate the friendship of you two!” She replied cheerfully.

“Pinkie, Luna is the Princess of the Night. She must be sleeping by now,” Twilight recalled Pinkie. The smile seems to have fallen from Pinkie’s face when she remembers that, but the smile quickly returned.

“Okie dokie lokie! So let’s have a party for her and you at night!”


Luna raised the moon with her magic, causing the sky to change from pink to dark blue. She looked at her work with a smile before entering the room and approaching the bed to pick up her book to continue training for her confession, but she stopped when she heard something falling on her balcony. She looked back and saw a rolled scroll. The dark blue alicorn approached the parchment and picked it up to read.

“Hi, Luna. Could you meet me at Sugarcube Corner? My friends and I are waiting for you. Signed Twilight Sparkle.”

Luna looked uncertain when she finished reading the letter. She wanted to go to see Twilight, but she also wanted to stay at the castle to train for her confession. She didn’t know what to do about it. That was not in the plans for her that night, she planned to train her confession, but Twilight was inviting her, and if there was one thing she didn’t want, it was that Twilight felt sad, especially because the unicorn was waiting for her. She looked thoughtfully at the book on the bed.

I think it doesn’t hurt to continue my confession training tomorrow. Because after all, she must have planned this since this morning.

The dark blue alicorn then went to the balcony, spread her wings and flew across the night sky. She wondered what Twilight had planned for her at Sugarcube Corner. Did the unicorn ask her on a date? No, it couldn’t be that, if it was that, Twilight wouldn’t have mentioned her friends in the letter.

Upon arriving at Sugarcube Corner, she landed and closed her wings. Luna then went up the few steps and knocked on the door to signal that she had arrived.

“Twilight, I’m here,” said Luna.

“Come on in, Luna,” said Twilight, on the other side of the door.

Luna went in and saw that the house was dark. This confused her, but before she could question, the lights went on. The room was decorated with balloons, on the tables were cupcakes, ponches and a chocolate cake with strawberry icing.

“Surprise!” The six mares shouted in unison. Luna was surprised about that, did Twilight invite her to Sugarcube Corner for a party? But today was not even her birthday.

Pinkie skipped over to Luna with a smile. “Did you like the surprise, princess?”

“Er… yes, but I don’t understand. Today is not even my birthday,” said Luna in a confused tone. Pinkie laughed at the answer.

“I know, silly, but this party It is not to celebrate your birthday, but it is to celebrate the friendship of you and Twilight,” Pinkie explained.

Luna was speechless with the answer. Pinkie threw a party to celebrate her friendship with Twilight? But wait, how does Pinkie know that she and Twilight have become friends?

“How do you know that Twilight and I became friends?” asked the Princess of Night.

“Twilight told us that you have been visiting her during the night, so I decided to have this party to celebrate the friendship of you two,” Pinkie replied.

Luna looked thrilled by Pinkie’s words. Did Pinkie throw a party to celebrate Twilight’s friendship with her? She never imagined anything like that.

“THANK YOU, PINKIE! WE FEEL HAPPY WITH THIS PARTY TO CELEBRATE OUR FRIENDSHIP WITH TWILIGHT SPARKLE!” said Luna with the Canterlot’s Royal Voice. The six mares were thrown back a little by the sudden Canterlot’s Royal Voice.

“Luna, the voice,” said Twilight with a smile, trying to keep from laughing.

Luna realized what she just did and apologized, “I’m sorry, Twilight, it’s just that I was very touched that it had a party to celebrate our friendship and I couldn’t control the tone of my voice.”

“It’s okay, princess, we know you didn’t wanted to do this,” said Fluttershy with a gentle smile. Luna perked up a little with the words of the yellow pegasus.

“Now let’s party, ponies!” shouted Pinkie excitedly, turning on the phonograph.

After a few hours, the party was over, Twilight and the others went to their homes. Except for Pinkie and Luna, Pinkie was because she was already at her house and Luna was because she decided to accompany Twilight to her library.

“So, Luna? What did you think of the party?” asked Twilight, looking at the Princess of Night.

“I liked. I never imagined that Pinkie would throw a party for us,” said Luna.

“Pinkie is like that, Luna. She likes to party for any occasion. Whether it’s for a pony that just arrived here in Ponyville, or to cheer somepony up,” said Twilight.

A question came to Luna’s mind. “Are you going to sleep now or are you going to still awake?”

Twilight thought for a few seconds before answering, “I’m going to sleep, because it’s too late of night.”

Luna looked sad that Twilight had to sleep on her night, but remembering that there would be the Grand Galloping Gala that made her happy, knowing that at least Twilight would be awake all night long.

Upon arriving at the library, Twilight opened the door and entered, but she soon heard the sound of footsteps coming from behind her. She looked back and saw that Luna was still with her. Raising an eyebrow confusedly, she said, “Aren’t you going back to Canterlot, Luna?”

To Twilight’s surprise, Luna blushed at the question and said, “Is it… is it okay with you if I sleep here with you tonight? You know… since it will be dawn in a few hours, I would like to rest a little because of the party we had.”

“But does the flight from Ponyville to Canterlot take too long?” asked Twilight.

“Unfortunately, yes,” Luna replied.

“Okay, Luna, I’m going to prepare your bed in the guest room.” Twilight was about to go upstairs to go to the guest room, but Luna stopped her.

“Wait!” Twilight looked back at Luna. “Why instead of sleeping in a guest room, I don’t sleep with you?”

Twilight didn’t know why, but she blushed about it. “W-we sleep together in the same bed? Are you sure, Luna?”

“Sure, Twilight, that way, saves beds, and besides, I would like your company to sleep,” Luna replied.

“Well, if you say ... Then follow me to my room,” said Twilight going back up the stairs, but this time it was to go to her room to sleep. Luna followed the unicorn with a smile, knowing that she could sleep with her future marefriend.

Upon reaching the bedroom, Twilight lay on the right side and Luna on the left side. Twilight snuggled up in the warm blanket and closed her eyes, letting out a breath, ready to fall asleep, but she soon felt hooves wrap around her in an embrace, making her open her eyes and blush about it. Twilight certainly didn’t expect Luna to decide to hug her in bed. She didn’t know what was going on with her. Why was she blushing? Was she okay? Well, she intended to see that tomorrow. She then closed her eyes and fell asleep.

Comments ( 6 )

Is good, Please continue you make a good job.

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That's grammar errors in author has. I can tell that's not what she meant in that part.

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I have a draft being written, but it is not ready yet because I'm busy in finish a requested story

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And than the next update is still being wondered when it will happen almost 3 years later.....

The story is amazing, I really want to see the end of it.

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